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Kalarikkal House [3] - [Thread 4 link - p. 144] (Page 4)

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 1:01pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ninand

I didnt think I would want to proceed any further from :

''She wondered if all women had foolish hearts that melted at such emotional drivel as a man trying to correctly pronounce their dead brother's name. ''

all the rains, and storm, and banana leaves and vines around the strangely sacred ritual, men and women loosing sense of what God must be .. and it has to be the upheaval inside him that decided that only what he didn't understand could numb him.
 there's aching tenderness in Kashi asking him to leave.. and an equally tender hope, that the man with all his vulnerabilities would be the one to bring the soul of the place to rest.
the cold brought about from the rains, the wetness, numbness and fear was so real.. i can almost breathe it in through my skin.
you write so well.


Spoken like a true romantic ;)



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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 1:03pm | IP Logged
"Kalarikkal Illathu aanu vazhilla. " what does it mean ??


what is happening Kalarikkal House

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 1:05pm | IP Logged
Her moment with the baby was poignant and touched the heart strings. Sums up how she imagines her future...devoid of such joys.
What was so unbearable in Unni's life that he went on an acid trip? Arnav's one can imagine.
The Land of Dead seems to make all her fears, real, imagined, prophesised come true.
Each update out does the last. Am enthralled...in a trance while reading.
Congratulations on Thread 3.


Edited by citi - 03 September 2012 at 3:08pm

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 1:07pm | IP Logged
Ok, that chapter sent the creepy crawlies over my skin.  He was definitely in a trance both during the ceremony and at home. different trances but still a trance.

I feel for her though, her suppressed emotions rising on holding the child so close, her fear on finding his clothes on fire, her palpable fear when she told him to leave the house afraid that the history of the house would find another victim, her feelings when she seemingly yielded to desire.  Hell of a ride!


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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 1:11pm | IP Logged
Congrats on the new thread... 3rd thread, yay! And to think you planned to end this story in a few chapters only initially! The update was intriguing, to say the least. It's past midnight here, and I was reading such a mystical update, it's enthralling, really ... The way you described Arnav being out of his senses was unsettling... And Kashi's concern for him... Great update... And at the cost of me sounding like a moron, I have to ask, Devi chechy, what does "Kalarikkal Illathu aanu vazhilla" mean?

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 1:19pm | IP Logged
amazing update, how easily u manage to tk us to a completly diff land and i cud visualise each scene unfolding in frnt of me.

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 1:21pm | IP Logged
I swear I am freaking out... my heart is freaking out... i need time to digest this... or time for this unknown fear to go away. 

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 1:24pm | IP Logged
Am feeling dreadful.
Am sure the story is definitely beyond my understanding, tho I try hard to understand the parts of it; its beyond my grasp.. It makes me wonder, what would this mean? And I feel, many times; I should ask you as a writer what does this mean or ask other readers who understand it! But then, hey it will be revealed in the future as the story proceeds.. so I stop myself raising the questions to you D! But really, I just keep on wondering what each character means by certain actions/ talks/ reactions of theirs..it just makes me more confused at times..
This FF is THAT good!
Thanks for writing it!

P.S. I will continue thinking what did some parts of this update meant!
P.P.S. Sometimes I feel, like we talk to our friends, like TALK TALK and solve the queries, I should talk to the writer and ask! Foolish of me, as I feel I do not understand most of the parts then! Cause I just imagine certain scenarios in 2-3 manners! Poor me!

Again, thanks..
Repeat: Am feeling dreadful.

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