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Posted: 06 September 2012 at 6:50am | IP Logged
Pallavi is such a strong character...always so impactful to read her parts...
Kashi's scared...hopefully pallavi's words will make her realize...
"Samayam aarkum vendi kattu nilkilla Kashi. Athukondu samayam kalayaruthu. Ethu shapam ethu veettino aarkko aayikkotte, ninakku sneham tonnunengil snehikkanam. Paripoornamayi. Athukondu maranam urappanengil onnorthal mathi. Maranam enthayalum urappanu. Ellavarkum. Shaapamayalum Illengilum." (Time waits for no one, Kashi. So, don't waste it. If there is a curse on the house or whoever, it doesn't matter, if you feel love, love. Completely. If death is certain because of that, just remember. Death is an absolute certainty. For everyone. Curse or not.)
Beautiful!

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all I can i say is that is one smart sister!!! I am glad she talked to kashi..she got her thinking in a different perspective!! awesome!

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wise words from a wise sister
why to worry abt something on which u have
no control
rather enjoy what u have to the fullest no ifsss

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Yes Yes Yes! Finally read Chapter 34 and 35!! :D :D

But you updated again!! Double YAY! *prances around the room*

Chapter 34. I've said it before, and I'll say it again. This story gets more and more dark and dangerous with each update. It makes the hair on my hands bristle and at the same time lures me forward, pushing me to read on and on and on.

I love the way Arnav speaks in this story. Or rather, the way you write. 

I quote- "It may seem like you are floating in air…" he said after a bit.  "It may seem like you can jump off a mountain and fly… or it may seem like…"  his gaze roamed the room until it fell on the dreaded drawing in the center.   "Or it may seem like that giant hooded snake is standing up and looking at you."  He looked at the long stringy leaves tied on the rope that were swaying by his head and touched one of them lightly.  "It may seem like this vine will grow and wrap itself around my neck and wring it till my life's breath squeezes out."  He looked up at her. "It may seem like you are an enchantress come to take away reluctant souls to the Land of the Dead."

It is positively devilish, how good you are at writing! 

I quote again- 
"I think I will follow you to the Land of the Dead if you asked me to."  He whispered as he buried his lips against her neck.

Parfait! :*

Chapter 35. Kashi's concern for Arnav touched my heart. Another one of their rare bonding moments. :') Arnav seems to be able to read her mind quite effectively now, isn't it? 

Interesting. :D

More on Chapter 36 when I read it! Bye for now!

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Posted: 06 September 2012 at 7:05am | IP Logged
Wow. I no longer feel bad for Pallavi. She knows what love is and was there to experience it. Now it is Kashi's turn to experience it and give herself to the feeling without any apprehension. Truly said "Death is a certainty" for all those who are born but we are always afraid of it. Your writing meets the line between fiction and truth. There are so many facts here which I can easily relate to. Who gets to decide what the truth is. The conversation between the sisters was so enthralling and esp when Kashi says if we don't believe in it, does i t make it less of a truth and Pallavi's answer to it. How do you manage to come with such fantastic updates, each woven with a new thought and mystery. 

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congrats for new thread!!

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Posted: 06 September 2012 at 7:13am | IP Logged
I'm actually understanding the language.. I didn't need the English translation for some of the lines.. Wow! :D Hahah! 

"Satyamenthanu?  Aaranu nischayikuunathu athu satyananennu?  Vishwasam vishwasamayi tanne nilkunnathanu nallathu.  Athine satyamakki mattiyal vere satyangal kanathe poyennu varum."  


Loved this line. See? I told you I'm starting to get it! :D

Pallavi is such a smart girl. In a weird way, she reminds me of my sister.. We're like that. She is the quiet, sensible one and I'm the loud, slightly madder one. :P But I guess you already knew that! :D

Great chapter Devi. :) 

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Pallavi is so wise and strong. Loss has made her a special person.

And Arnav Bitwaa, it is time for a shave!
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