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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 5:24pm | IP Logged

D,

Just checked the first pages today again and the picture of Pallavi is sooo good. What a calm face. Beautiful.

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How did he not get burned? Ah, creepy!!!

The seemingly lighthearted banter between Arnav and kashi held a much deeper meaning beneath the surface. Nicely written.

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Congrats on the new thread...loved the updates...thanks for the PM..cant wait to read more

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This was sooo good. One of your best updates... C ant wait to read more.

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31 chapters in one go 4 am here
U are one skilled lady
Love how grounded to ur roots u are. U have a fantastic understanding of the culture, the arts, beliefs, traditions, and of course language..curses included...really salute u on this
A very very beautiful heavenly tale set in gods' own country...I learned so much myself..
I have also loved how the daily routien has been portrayed
how their relationship is developing.. an invetiable attraction
I could go on and on and on..
a very very unique story..
U r a phenomenal writer, my last kerala based book was god of small things...trust me .. U r wayyy better than u know who..

jiyo mere yaar


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Wayy! Finally got to read the latest updates as I was sick. Congrats for the new thread... may you have many more. Judging from the updates... I know you will have many more cause they are amazinggg!!!

 
 

Chapter 34

The sleeve of his shirt on fire? I don't know I feel about that. I fear for them- Arnav and Kashi. There is a higher power, a different power that is turning the events, which makes it scarier to think about cause there is nothing you can do about this- limited options, sealed fate.

 

The kiss reflected the intensity and the passion and the words surprised me. If I didn't know Arnav's character that well. I would say- It felt like an obsession, being hypnotized, spell-bound, mesmerised. This is turning into Kashi's worst nightmare.
 
 
Chapter 35
 
 
I liked that they were able to talk about what happened and he adressed her fears. Who wouldn't be afraid when you carry a self-fulfilling prophecy of what you are and might do to the people around you. Is it too early to see the surface of care and beginning of love? Care can lead to many things... will it turn to love? To the forbidden territory? Intriguing. Have I said how much I love your story? Amazed.
 
 


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That was brilliant!

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Posted: 06 September 2012 at 3:52am | IP Logged
fantastico!!!Clap

rheotic questions:
how does he touch the heart of her emotions everytime?
how does she know that he is gonna be written in  the illam's history anyway?
was that lady with a baby relevant to the story? i have a feeling it is...

loving it each time you update!

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