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Kalarikkal House [3] - [Thread 4 link - p. 144] (Page 18)

kvarsha IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 2:53am | IP Logged
awesome updatess...
 
chap 33...
tht was surely a cool chapp..
all the memory of his brother  and his sffereing
abd locking himself is due th tht curse of what or coz he saw lakshmi...
then he died without any how it is possible oh my its cozz supernatural power...
 
and kashi has same curse tht follwedfrom devakii ...
i think devaki suffered alot coz her husband may tht the curse it following them in their famliy...
the past was so scaryy...
 
chap 34..
loved the chap the way u showed the power of supernatul was awesomee...
and women belief in standing rain tht was nice..
and arnav got so involved himself in tht rituals it is a part of
curse ...
the way u discribed the man dancing with fire on his body was truely awesomee...
and the kiss at at end was so niceEmbarrassed
 
 
chap 35...
the haapening btwn them is tht also cozz curse or their attraction towards eachotherr...
kashi caring for arnav was cutee...
return of our is also niceLOL
he never forgets to tease herr...
loved their convooEmbarrassed
atlast while reading these updates i left like things happening infront of me thts how beautifully u write them
update soon
thnx 4 pmBig smile
 
 

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MaankiMariam Senior Member
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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 3:06am | IP Logged
loved this chapter

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savvz Senior Member
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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 4:57am | IP Logged
alarming update..
kashi .. curses... snakes... and now fire... this is getting intoxicating... :D

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anuprika Senior Member
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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 5:10am | IP Logged
my exams over thank god!!!
both of them have realised they have fallen for each other.
whatever be the explanation for fire right now i can say. it has really feared kashi.
i am sure she is gonna ignore what has happened between them.
but sure they wont be able to do it.
so can they overcome the curse?
is this what govindan namboothiri wanted him to do too-die for her
or atleast realise men cannt be in kalarikkal house.
loved the thullal scene.after long hours of moving their body like snake the women here will not remamber it after the ritual.have seen it a lot.
so for me arnav going iin a trance for minutes is just fine and believable
loved loved loved the updatesSmile

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 5:13am | IP Logged
no one remotely human reading this could not soften or fall so deeply in love with these characters.
 
I swear the fear runs so damn deep... The fear for her and him. for them together.
 
I wish I could stop believing...

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 5:17am | IP Logged
Firstly 'Congratulations of Thread 3'!!!!! 

Great updates again! I can't believe Arnav didn't realise his sleeve was on fire!! This story is really full of twists and turns - something I was not expecting happens in every chapter!! 
I truly hope Arnav doesn't die at KH (lol)... And him and Kashi get to be together without any stupid superstitions and tales to haunt them...'one can dream, right?'
Thanks for the PM!!! 

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 5:43am | IP Logged
Well wow.. Day Dreaming Loved it a lot..

So he is back.. But he did ask her some questions which she cudnt answer straight.. Of course she is worried for his well being, its just that she wont accept it...

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 5:55am | IP Logged
Hiya! Ohk, time to tell you how awesome you are!


You are Awesome!! :D

Hehehehehehehe.

I am loving lov-lov-loving Kalarikkal House. *in a sing-song voice*

Shall I right a little something on the last few chapters? Shall I? Ohk, I shall! :P :D

Chapter 30. This is one thing I always imagined I would do with my little sister, if I had one that is. :( :P Various expressions, and various words in relation to them. I liked how Arnav interpreted all the words through Kashi's expressions. How innovative you are, re!

Chapter 31. Aah, the bickering between Arnav and Kashi. It just makes me laugh out loud and melt into a puddle of goo all in the same moment! I adore these little teasing conversations between the duo. Arnav deliberately mispronouncing those words was hilarious. And it made me go Awww. :D :D

But I equally love those little, rare moments of bonding between them. It lights up my face instantly. Bravo at that chapter!

Chapter 32. One thing that makes me come back for more here would be the vast expanse of information. You give us something new in each update to store in our heads. Something that I didn't know before. I read your updates, and I go like oooh, really? I didn't know that! 

Another observation of mine is that this story has become so hypnotic. I feel like there is a undercurrent of something sinister in the plot. Something dark. Spooky, eh? :P

Chapter 33. An update on Kashi's brother. Finally a glimpse of the past. But, you just left us as confused and restless as before, re. Did he not die due to drug overdose? Then how did he die?!?! 

More later. Gotta read two more updates! Can't wait, can't wait! :D Bye Bye!

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