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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 1:48am | IP Logged
Wonderful update! I am really confused about him not getting a burnt and this whole thing is just so mysterious and I absolutely LOVE it!Smile 

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 2:07am | IP Logged
"If you were a lesser man, you would not fall for me" - So she knows, and from his reaction, it looks like he has accepted the fact tooSmile
Nice update, and I can't help saying that these two are adorable...

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 2:08am | IP Logged

Late again! #double facepalm... rubbs head and frowns

 
So... this was another beautiful chapter alltogether. I am in love with the pace of the story! Like in love with it! AWWW GAAAWWDDD... gee shucks! Kasshi and Awnav... I am in loouurrvv with the duo (Last line in the american accent, thankyou)
 
DUDE!!!! I finally understood the implication of the Arnav losing sense of time, when he stared. It has something to do with the various curses on the house, isn't it? Is it? Tell me naa... PLEASE
 
neeways- Great chapter Devi chechy!
 
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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 2:48am | IP Logged
The way you've scripted this chapter, is just implausible, I mean Khushi's fear. concern that Arnav might face the fate that has been faced by her other loved ones. And there is this raw sensuality, that crackles, heats up the chapter, every time these two characters come together. Needless to say, I love the last part. Amazing Devi, as always.

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 2:53am | IP Logged
awesome updatess...
 
chap 33...
tht was surely a cool chapp..
all the memory of his brother  and his sffereing
abd locking himself is due th tht curse of what or coz he saw lakshmi...
then he died without any how it is possible oh my its cozz supernatural power...
 
and kashi has same curse tht follwedfrom devakii ...
i think devaki suffered alot coz her husband may tht the curse it following them in their famliy...
the past was so scaryy...
 
chap 34..
loved the chap the way u showed the power of supernatul was awesomee...
and women belief in standing rain tht was nice..
and arnav got so involved himself in tht rituals it is a part of
curse ...
the way u discribed the man dancing with fire on his body was truely awesomee...
and the kiss at at end was so niceEmbarrassed
 
 
chap 35...
the haapening btwn them is tht also cozz curse or their attraction towards eachotherr...
kashi caring for arnav was cutee...
return of our is also niceLOL
he never forgets to tease herr...
loved their convooEmbarrassed
atlast while reading these updates i left like things happening infront of me thts how beautifully u write them
update soon
thnx 4 pmBig smile
 
 

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 4:57am | IP Logged
alarming update..
kashi .. curses... snakes... and now fire... this is getting intoxicating... :D

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 5:10am | IP Logged
my exams over thank god!!!
both of them have realised they have fallen for each other.
whatever be the explanation for fire right now i can say. it has really feared kashi.
i am sure she is gonna ignore what has happened between them.
but sure they wont be able to do it.
so can they overcome the curse?
is this what govindan namboothiri wanted him to do too-die for her
or atleast realise men cannt be in kalarikkal house.
loved the thullal scene.after long hours of moving their body like snake the women here will not remamber it after the ritual.have seen it a lot.
so for me arnav going iin a trance for minutes is just fine and believable
loved loved loved the updatesSmile

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 5:13am | IP Logged
no one remotely human reading this could not soften or fall so deeply in love with these characters.
 
I swear the fear runs so damn deep... The fear for her and him. for them together.
 
I wish I could stop believing...

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