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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 11:49pm | IP Logged
im totally confused.nothing makes sense.

not tht ur writing has any problem,but i think it is bz i hv a much lesser intelligence.i hope all this wud be clear one day.

good tht kashi n arnav talked abt it openly.good tht arnav was rational n helped kashi to cme back to her rationality.also loved how he spported her wen her fears came out silently.

their last talk i didnt follow.but im used to such riddles n not understand by now.lol.

like the way story is moving.it is gearing up for something big.

the thing u said abt 'unexplained phenomenas wer really good.it gave me some hope.

n thanks for the fast update

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 12:02am | IP Logged
wow...i just felt like i saw a part of d mlym film 'manichithrathazhu'...wow..

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 12:21am | IP Logged
wow.. i m glued... they are such an enigmatic pair.. Devi.. excellent story.. 

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 12:46am | IP Logged
I'm totally in love with your writing style...I'm a malayalee too, and I can relate with all the descriptions about the village  and the ancestral house of kashi , and the religious rituals like 'Sarpam Thullal', as I spent my early childhood in a village in Alleppey.  I think you should publish this as a novel after you finish the story.  I'm sure it will be loved and appreciated for the creativity and  the beauty of  your imagination. And I loved all the pictures that you've put up.  I like the way you've weaved the story  around the beautiful people, Arnav and Kashi(khushi). That made our imagination easier and  more romantic. This is not just any other mills and boons kind of story. It has got a touch of classiness and talent. Congrats. Waiting for the next part... 

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 1:48am | IP Logged
Wonderful update! I am really confused about him not getting a burnt and this whole thing is just so mysterious and I absolutely LOVE it!Smile 

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 2:07am | IP Logged
"If you were a lesser man, you would not fall for me" - So she knows, and from his reaction, it looks like he has accepted the fact tooSmile
Nice update, and I can't help saying that these two are adorable...

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 2:08am | IP Logged

Late again! #double facepalm... rubbs head and frowns

 
So... this was another beautiful chapter alltogether. I am in love with the pace of the story! Like in love with it! AWWW GAAAWWDDD... gee shucks! Kasshi and Awnav... I am in loouurrvv with the duo (Last line in the american accent, thankyou)
 
DUDE!!!! I finally understood the implication of the Arnav losing sense of time, when he stared. It has something to do with the various curses on the house, isn't it? Is it? Tell me naa... PLEASE
 
neeways- Great chapter Devi chechy!
 
-V

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 2:48am | IP Logged
The way you've scripted this chapter, is just implausible, I mean Khushi's fear. concern that Arnav might face the fate that has been faced by her other loved ones. And there is this raw sensuality, that crackles, heats up the chapter, every time these two characters come together. Needless to say, I love the last part. Amazing Devi, as always.

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