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Kalarikkal House [3] - [Thread 4 link - p. 144] (Page 16)

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 10:50pm | IP Logged
To his credit, it only took a moment before he guessed that he had said something wrong.

He pulled back from her and cleared this throat before he said, "I didn't mean that, of course."

The chill inside her now felt all the more intense without the warmth of his body next to her.

"Of course!" she said

Loved this part... She is most vulnerable at this point and still has to reply to his earlier talk to make him feel comfortable...


There must be an explanation.  She just needed to research it.  There were always explanations.  The unexplained was only the unexplained because someone had not figured out how to explain it.

Liked the confidence here..I too wonder what is it..like many readers...


"There we go.  More manhandling again."  she said, cocking an eyebrow.  

He didn't take the bait and instead asked, "Or is it because you worry that I too will die here?"

Her eyes widened in shock and she felt her strength give out.

His arms went around her waist immediately to prop her up.

She didn't know much time passed before she finally spoke, trying to find the energy to straighten on her own.

"I don't believe in curses."  She finally said.

He does it again!

I just feel it for her..its sooo difficult for her..


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Suni Goldie
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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 10:51pm | IP Logged
Really like your new picture of Pallavi. Very pretty and can imagine her as Sanaya's (Kashi) sister. The other lady seemed much older. Is this girl a Malyalee actress or a veena player? What about the lady you portrayed as Devaki? Who is she? She is gorgeous. My favorite though is Nalan. You picked the right kid to portray him.

Missing Nalan in the story BTW...Tongue


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beautiful update D...

loved it...

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 11:02pm | IP Logged
Arnav is a perceptive fellow...figuring out Kashi quite well! So has he tempted fate? Let's see :-))

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Anamika100 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 11:03pm | IP Logged
He is very susceptible to all the forces of the house and surroundings.  I can not even Imagine how his sleeve could get on fire and he did not even realize...there is so much explained stuff going on.

It is major progress that she is now asking him to go away because she is worried for him.  Is this love or the power of the house ensnaring him?
 
The land of the dead reference keeps coming up...was this concept (if specific)  explained before or the generic meaning applies here?


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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 11:22pm | IP Logged
So much passion!

And such a strong bond of love linking them.

When you introduced Kashi in this FF, that moment I knew that when Kashi finally fell in love, it would be a unique, one-of-a-kind, inconvenient, fire-like, explosive phenomenon. Glad to be witnessing it.

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 11:46pm | IP Logged
awesome !!!!

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Another intense one..wonderful

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