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Kalarikkal House [3] - [Thread 4 link - p. 144] (Page 128)

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Posted: 26 September 2012 at 11:05pm | IP Logged
oh my blessed god!

they shared a dream? are they truly re-incarnations of Devaki and Gandharv?

i cannot believe he is leaving... i dont think the house/illam/forest/unseen forces at play will let him leave.

there is a reason he is here. reason he has been summoned to come here.

probably to fulfil Devaki's and Gandharva's love/curse? whatever you call it?

what about Lakshmi? he saw her right? what happened to that?

Kashi knows he has to go... leave... she loves him but is relieved that he will be fine... but if they are truly re-incarnate... how can he leave her? she is the other half of his soul...

i want to desperately know what Kashi's father has to say about all this... he must have some inkling... i want to hear Namboothiri's thought...

have missed your updates...

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 4:31am | IP Logged
oh my Gosh!!!!!!i cant say i loved each  nevery part of this update r praise it with words like-fantastic,amazing,wonderful,breath taking etc.
 
 
bz this was an ordinary chap with an essentially common feeling,not to mention the presence of the fight bwn common sense n mysteriousness!tht made it spl n interesting,ofcourse!
 
i expected this.initially no.but then it shud be dreamt by both of them.the doubt abt my reincarnation has not gone fully but this update satisfied r rather solved some of my doubts!so im happy,for now!
 
n the last part was highly predictable.i knw kashi wont agree to it now,but i dont mind.i can live on tht last sentence for long!the wait was worth.thank you so much devi.
 
also liked the way they discussed n asserted tht they r not devaki n gandarva with reasons-if u call them reasons.but yet,it was a nice scene to watch.i felt the 3 seconds i took to read tht part was worth it.
 
only a person like u can make worthy scenes evn from an ordinary or a subtle chap in such a mysterious story(i do knw this is not the first time u doing so,but still cudnt hold back from appreciating)Clap
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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 10:14am | IP Logged
Hi there! I'm a new reader of your story and I must admit you had me hooked by the second chapter! 
This is such a magical story with so much depth in emotions and ancestral history!
There is so much praise circling in my head for your talent with words but I have no idea how to order and word it.
But still I have to get some of it out.
The way you began this story, I would have never guessed that such an intricate we would be weaved into the story line. 
It began so normally but as Arnav and Kashi began to get more and more involved with each other unknowingly, the history of Kalarikkal House began to ensnare them. 
I was literally at the edge of my seat by the end of each chapter, eagerly rushing to read the next!
This is seriously brilliant!

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 11:27am | IP Logged
Brilliant...specially the last line I will leave if you come with me...my god my heart went ...Thud...dhak dhak...awesome
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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 11:29am | IP Logged
I hope u r feeling better now...
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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 12:01pm | IP Logged
Woah Devi kutty, it looks like ur back with a bang! Hope ur feeling better! Thnks a ton for the update, was stalking like mad as usual. Loved it. They shared dreams. I loved it when arnie baby said he would go if kashi goes with him!! Wow! Can't wait for kashi's reaction!!. Phenomenal!!!

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 5:06pm | IP Logged
hey, these were some beautiful chapters :) the past converging into the present was written so well, it was almost hypnotic, almost like the sarpam thullal ritual.
looking forward to the next pm!
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Posted: 28 September 2012 at 1:21am | IP Logged
Loved it:-)

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