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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 4:50am | IP Logged
WOW.

the last sentences literally gave me the chills.

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 5:03am | IP Logged
DANGEROUS story i have ever read D...!!!

the perfection with which u mix all the emotions starting from affection, sarcasm, love to the dreadful terror, throwing in myths n magic ... makes this story dangerous yet enthralling!!!

Arnav being in complete trance... that he didnt even realize his shirt being on fire until she pointed out after they reached home...gave me true chills...

bt the kiss after that n the followed reactions, warmed me enough before u threw in the ubber cold ultimate part of the update effectively freezing me... believe me... as i say it froze me, it really did that i dint move my eyes away from those words for a complete 2 mins...
and my fingers are still shaking...

Arnav saying that he'll follow her to the land of dead... implying their speech from the effects of Acid... proving the dreadful trance he is in...
you are the true enchantress D...
hypnotizing us with this terribly enchanting and daring tale that makes my blood run cold at times...

i bow down before ur impressive creativity for spinning such an inescapable web of this tale around us...

loving it more n more...yet dreading the end!!!!

~~~ sam 

p.s.
congrats on the new thread hon...


Edited by sparklystarstud - 04 September 2012 at 8:49am

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 5:19am | IP Logged
yup every time I read it my heart pummels into my stomach and stays there for quite some time...
 
I have re-read that chapter at least 3 times and damn you are amazing. I can feel her fear... I can almost taste it.
 
I don't know what they are doing... I don't know how I see you saving this. I don't know anything about curses and myths and all these religious spiritual practices I just can't even believe how realistically you have written all this and how i am falling into this deeper and deeper.
 
I would follow them to the land of the dead...
 
damn woman you always amaze me. THANK YOU.

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 5:22am | IP Logged

awesome update D...

n congratz for the new thread dear...

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 5:53am | IP Logged
kashi's insecurities and her fear that something will happen to arnav if she marries him stops her from gettimg closer to arnav.but fate has other plans definitely arnav will try proposing 


awesome update loved it 

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 5:57am | IP Logged
Woahh, last sentence was spot on!!!

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 6:57am | IP Logged
Congrats on the new thread.. Hug
Amazing chapter.. Arnav has started to live with her, her life.. And now she is scared for him, his well being.. That my friends is what love is all about.. Both want to live and die for each other.. Very very interesting.. Loving the way it is going..

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 7:25am | IP Logged
i am actually shivering after reading this chapter.
arnav going into a trance was beautifuuly described,i myself have gone into a trance once,its a weird feeling,we are neither here nor there!
and finally kashi responded to him and acknowleded her love and attraction towards him!
and the two kissing scenes gave me goosebumps and i felt as if i was being kissedEmbarrassed
and the last line was truly the best!chilling and romantic !
 
you described the rituals too perfectly ,felt like i am standing there watching the scene unfold!
 
thank you for writing this story! i really live for it and thnx for the pm!

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