Kalarikkal House [3] - [Thread 4 link - p. 144] - Page 53

Oh wow. His reaction, the scream, the tears from both of them. Broke my heart. Powerful and intense update Devi. Please let these tortured souls find some comfort in each other.

i love this girl
'try not screaming bloody murder'...classic
If he has no control over his basic instincts and is going to scream.. then she has no control over her basic instinct and is going to chk on him regardless of what he has said...
u have put this across beautifully..
his well being has become her basic instinct

that was an unexpected reaction from arnav .but somewhere deep i wanted him to respond so. Edited by anuprika - 11 years ago

 Arnav sheer cry of loss,helplessness could b felt by us then 

both of them sailing in the same boat...

😭 for both of them ! .Period.

no words could describe..i felt goosebumps after reading the way you wrote his pain and kashi's soothing...

I will probably be able to make a proper detailed comment only after I've found out whether Arnav does scream bloody murder in his sleep. His dreams always turn out to be incredibly informative. Or you might just choose to cheat and skip ahead to the next morning.I  will wait to find out.


& oh yes, as always, this one's for you---👏.

Wow just wow !! Yess arnav didn't run away n neither will kashi nw :)

Phew! Wht was Tht Devi? Read it twice am gonna read it again!!!! Loved it, awesome, I can't believe I feel like watching a movie with all the scenes playing right in front of my eyes! Ur truly gifted girl. But it was a cliff hanger indeed! Can't wait to see Wht will happen next! Too much going on lol!