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its way tooo beautiful... 

The way the story is going, I hav this feeling that something bad is going to happen..

Every time. Every single time. How do you manage it Devi? Beautiful writing. 

too beautiful.i am simply wordless.

Oh my god... Oh my god... Oh my god... Oh my god... Oh my god...Sorry at the moment that is the only thing going through my mind...Just read all four chapters in a go...and I think I am slightly scared and in wonder...beautifully written that is all I can say. I really cannot wait for the next one. I think Kashi knows now...she knows who he is...their relationship...and I cannot believe that the place that he had imagined was the temple of snakes that he had not seen before. That explains his behavior. I did not catch this. I need to go reread all 4 chapters again

It is 10:30 pm, I have a test tomorrow, and after reading this, I don't think I will be able to sleep. The corridor that is right opposite to me is not helping; though it is not totally dark, it has a long showcase that sends off weird reflections if we walk, or just watch (!), and then there's a window right behind me, and though there is no full moon, there is an eerie light. And my eyes look a lot like Shobana's tonight, the mirror by my side is not helping me at all. 

How easily did Arnav unleash his fears and how calmly Khushi accepted the truth! This is the epitome of trust in a relationship. To give it all and have it as secured with another person as it was secured with you. The dreams are so poignant. Like they have another story to tell through the most atheist individual alive. Beautiful work.Edited by AllSmiles86 - 11 years ago

im having a very weird feeling after reading this..there was a point where i was having trouble in breathing..all this is sooo haunting..i wonder how u manage to do this..

i realy loved it so emotional and so nice

lovely chapter... Though the lack of burns is pretty mysterious...