Copy paste of kriyaansh...os

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Posted: 11 years ago
COPY PASTE OF KRIYAANSH..

Smriti came to st.louis to meet gautam...where she saw the louians enjoying...smriti looks down and went to the office...swayam had turned at that time and saw smriti...he was shocked..
Swayam-Guys kria ki mom!!!...
All-Huh??...
They follow smriit...who went inside...where gautam was...
Smriti-Kya chahte ho tum gautam??...
Gautam was quiet he was just looking at smriti...
Gautam-Mein ek bacchi ko usski mom wapas dena chahta hun!!!...
Smriti looks at him shocked...
Smriti-21years baad tumhe yaad aaya??...
Gautam-Haan aaya mujhe!!!...tum yeh nahi chahti??...
Smriti laughs...
Smriti-Mein??...jaante ho mein kya chahti thi???...meri beti ki khushi!!!...mein kya chahti thi???...ki meri beti bhi baaki bachon se ghule mile...lekin bachpan se usse akela rehna hi accha laga..kyun??...ussko dar laga!!!...mein sirf meri beti ki khushi chahti thi...aur kuch nahi!!!...
Smriti was crying...
Gautam-Tum kisski baat kar rahi ho smriti??...
Smriti-Kissi ki nahi..tumhe usse koi matlab nahi hona chahiye!!...
Gautam-Tell me smriti!!!...
Smriti-Kria!!!...uss ladki ka naam kria hain...voh meri choti beti hain...meri badi beti se 10mahine badi!!!...
Gautam was shocked...
All-Choti beti!!!...
Smriti turns...and saw the group...
Vishakha-Aunty kria kaha hain kaisi hain!!!...
Simmi-Ya aunty where is she??...and aise hi she went...
Smriti-Jhuti care dekhaane ki zarurat nahi!!!...
Rey-Nahi dekhaayenge...waise bhi uss b***h ke baare mein kisse jaana hain!!!...uss looser ke baarein mein bhala hum qyun jaane!!!...as if we care...about that girl!!!...bloody backstabber!!...
Smriti-Haan thi meri beti ek looser...thi voh ek b***h!!!...
All shocked...
Sharon-Aunty...aap khudki beti ke baare mein aise bol rahi hain!!...
Smriti-Haan bol rahi hun mein aise apni beti ke baare mein...
All shocked and confused...
Gautam-Smriti???...
Smriti-Meri beti ne bhi tum logon ki backstabbing sunni thi..usse backstabber bolne se pehle khudko dekhlo...mr.reyaansh singhaania...apne baap jaise ghatiya aur gire huye ho!!!...
Swayam-Aunty what are you talking!!!...
Smriti-Ek gaya toh dusra aagaya...tum toh apne mom and dad dono par nahi gaye ho...i mean how can they even call you their son!!!...unnki itni ghatiya soch nahi thi...
All shocked...
Sharon-Excuse mein aunty...aap hoti kaun hain...
Smriti-Mein meri beti ki mom...jo aaj tum logon ki wajha se...
She stops...
Neha-Aunty hum loogon ki wajha se??...
Smriti-Kuch nahi...kissne baat kar rahi hun!!!...mujhe jisse baat karni thi kar li now i need to go...
Bharat-Kria hain kaisi??...
Smriti-Jaana hain??..
All nod...
Smriti *closing her eyes*-Kria ab iss duniya mein nahi rahi!!!...ussne khudko fan se latka dia tha!!!...maar daala ussne khudko...
She broke down crying...all shocked...gautam was quiet...reyam numb!!!...
Smriti-Actually ussne suicide nahi usska murder hua tha...maine toh bad order diye..murder kia tum logono ne!!!...
She was crying...sharon went to smriti...
Sharon-Aunty aap kya bol rahi hain???...jhut hain na yeh sab??...
Smriti was crying badly...and told them about the promise...and then how kria had returned to st.louis...but had seen rey proposing taani and the group insulting kria...how she ran away to her home...and a week after when smriti returned from office she saw her daughter had hanged herself...and on the wall it was written..."I GIVE UP"...(the same way how the guy commited suicide in 3idiots)...
Rey fell on his knees...
Rey *shouts*-BAATCUTTER!!!!...
And he fell on the ground...crying bitterly...even swayam...
Two years later...
Rey sitting in front of a grave...
Rey-Aaj do saal hogaye tumhaari death ko baatcutter...aisa lagta hain jaise kal hi tumne mujhe kaha tha ki we both are more than just good friends...jaise tumne do saal baad apni jaan li...mein bhi waise hi mar raha hun...tum nahi jaanti maine kaise yeh do saal guzaare hain...har din ghut ghut kar jeeta tha!!!...jaate jaate yeh kehna chahta hun...i love you baatcutter!!...
And he took his last breath!!!...and fell down!!!...
18years later...a girl came running into the mansion...
Girl-Daddy...mommy!!!...
Went to a  woman and man...
Woman-Kya hua beta??...
Girl-Rey ko dekho na...wapas mujhe tang kar raha hain!!!...
Woman hits her head...
Woman-Your 17 kria!!!...come on beta..
Man-Kyun daat rahi ho meri princess ko sharon!!!...
Kria smiled...
Woman-Haww...tum hi baagdte ho isse swayam!!!...
Yes...the woman was sharon and man swayam..and the girl kria shekhawat...their 17year old daughter...a guy came in...
Guy-Shona...i am sorry na!!!...
Sharon-Dekho sorry bol raha hain na rey tumhe!!!...
Kria-Aap bas reyaansh ki side lo!!!...
A woman and man came in..
Woman-Kyun pareshaan karte ho kria ko?...
Rey-Mom!!...aap usski side kyun lete ho...
Man-Neha...chill...dono ka jhagda voh log khud solve karenge...
Neha-Baat toh sahi hain vicky!!...
The woman was neha and man vicky...and the guy reyaansh rathore...their 17year old son!!!...
Sharon-Chalo ab dono school jao...
Kriyaansh junior-Urgh!!!..
They go to the car fighting...
Sharon-Ek dum kria aur rey jaise hain!!...
Neha-Copy paste of kriyaansh...junior kriyaansh!!...
They laugh and go back to their home...

THE END...

Kaisa tha???...phaltu??...bakwaas??...accha??...please share ur views!!!...hope u all lyked it!!!...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was nice ...

I liked it really 

Good pot rate of emotions 

Junior kriyansh dats really awesome 

And dat to of Swaron and viha ...

He he he nice I liked it 

Super cute 
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fabulous OS 👏...
The title is Amazing "Copy paste of Kriyaansh" ...
Loved it ❤️...
N thanks for the pm 😊.
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Posted: 11 years ago
rlly nice ausum wrk...loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsome os
thankx 4 d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
U r a devil...u knw i was gngto post my first os which was almost similar to ur os...nyways very eell written but yaar i dnt understand sab aise story m swayam ko evil q show karte h...as far as his character s shown he'll never say bad thmg abt ny1
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awwieee.. So cute...:)
Loved it<3
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow. . . .
Awsome lovd it. . .
Sory 4 late coment. . . .
Thankz 4 the pm. . .
Keep writng ff,ss nd os. . .. . . .
I jst lovd the way u write. . . . . .
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing OS
loved it
so the first half of the OS did make me but second half was soo sweet
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome os...
loved it...