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FF: SHAMELESS #3, Link pg 151 (Page 63)

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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 3:09am | IP Logged
oh my awsuuum update dear...really loved it n thnx 4da pm...

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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 2:38pm | IP Logged
amazing update. Loved it

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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 3:57pm | IP Logged
Wow story getting interesting natasha has gone crazy good thing kushi didnt take the pills thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 9:44pm | IP Logged
Seriously. WHAT THE.
How many psychos can there possibly be in one family (plus their neighbours)? ALOT. Anjali and Natasha are just at the top of the pole though, to be honest. I can't believe Natasha is considering plastic surgery and Anjali is just on a whole new level of disturbed having cctv-ed her husband's creepy shed. These women seriously need to take up a hobby...like knitting. Maybe Nani will be a good influence on them...but then, her influence clearly hasn't worked. And I'm even starting to be suspicious of Dia...after all, you always have to watch out for the quiet ones. Natasha and Anjali are too obviously crazy for their plans to actually work but Dia was supposed to be Khushi's friend. Which would mean that Khushi was around her alot because she was blackmailing her?! And now Dia doesn't want her to remember...probably she was secretive with her call because she was ordering more freaky banned chemical drugs. I feel sorry for Roy...clearly he turned to alcohol to escape his crazy family.

But three cheers for the normal people club! E.g. Payal, Akash, NK, Nani and of course Aman! I love that dude. So clever. I was actually wondering how taking Khushi to an isolated part of the woods would be any better than some crazy high-rise, but then there was lots and lots of security so I was relieved. I was also relieved that Arnav called the doctor before the doctor called Shantivan...2 points now for the normal people club!

Can't wait to see what happens next, it is all so thrilling, you write so well! Normally, thrillers frustrate me but you've planned it so well and the plot is flowing at a nice pace. :)

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 4:01am | IP Logged
This is getting really intriguing...loved it

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 2:40pm | IP Logged
i read this story in one go...the title is so misleading..i never thought this story would be so intersting..just loved it...good job...continue soon.

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 5:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Anjali250194

Seriously. WHAT THE.
How many psychos can there possibly be in one family (plus their neighbours)? ALOT. Anjali and Natasha are just at the top of the pole though, to be honest. I can't believe Natasha is considering plastic surgery and Anjali is just on a whole new level of disturbed having cctv-ed her husband's creepy shed. These women seriously need to take up a hobby...like knitting. Maybe Nani will be a good influence on them...but then, her influence clearly hasn't worked. And I'm even starting to be suspicious of Dia...after all, you always have to watch out for the quiet ones. Natasha and Anjali are too obviously crazy for their plans to actually work but Dia was supposed to be Khushi's friend. Which would mean that Khushi was around her alot because she was blackmailing her?! And now Dia doesn't want her to remember...probably she was secretive with her call because she was ordering more freaky banned chemical drugs. I feel sorry for Roy...clearly he turned to alcohol to escape his crazy family.

But three cheers for the normal people club! E.g. Payal, Akash, NK, Nani and of course Aman! I love that dude. So clever. I was actually wondering how taking Khushi to an isolated part of the woods would be any better than some crazy high-rise, but then there was lots and lots of security so I was relieved. I was also relieved that Arnav called the doctor before the doctor called Shantivan...2 points now for the normal people club!

Can't wait to see what happens next, it is all so thrilling, you write so well! Normally, thrillers frustrate me but you've planned it so well and the plot is flowing at a nice pace. :)

haha yeah there are some psychos running around..LOL

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 5:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by aanchal_c

i read this story in one go...the title is so misleading..i never thought this story would be so intersting..just loved it...good job...continue soon.

glad u liked it! and what did u think the title meant storywise? just curiousSmile


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