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FF: SHAMELESS #3, Link pg 151 (Page 57)

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 1:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by duncanelise

You have spun a really really tangled web with this story... There are just so many things that are happening in each chapter! So someone drugged Khushi, I hope her memory comes back soon, cause I'm dying to know about the past 10 months. I'm still having this feeling that it was Khushis imposter who was living in the house all this while and I don't care if I'm proved wrong, because I'm sure that when you reveal the truth, it is just going to be a dhamakedar shocker!
Anjali is so delusional that it is very disturbing, gives me the creeps to see just how much. As for Natasha, well, pathetic is the word that comes to mind. That is a mix of inflated ego and self worth with deep seated insecurities... A dangerous combination, so I'm scared to see what she'll do next..
Loved the moment between Arnav and Khushi.. I just love the fact that they are away from the world...
Brilliant update!

thanks, glad u liked it. anjali's delusions are increasing day by day. and u described natasha perfectly. she's just obsessed with being mrs. asr and unfortunately the other 3 women have only strengthened her beliefs of entitlement.

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 1:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by aycma98

... this is sooo crazy! the entire family has gone mad. extremely mad. it's like watching a freak show. and oh god anjali!! geez. she's psychotic! i hope they won't find out where arnav and khushi lives... i want them to remember everything and face the world together! :/

yup they're all pretty messed up except a fewShocked
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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 1:48pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by asdfjkl

amazing update once again :)

"But Anjali did not focus on it.
Because in her mind, she saw her own face staring back at her.

She was the woman with Shyam in the shed..the one who caused him to moan out loud..the one he clutched closer..

Her husband loved her so much, thought Anjali, smiling.."

That part definitely illustrated perfectly how unstable Anjali is at this point. 

and then Natasha is apparently insane at this point to :|

I'm glad Arnav called the doctor back immediately and stopped Khushi from taking the pills. Hopefully the two can remember and sort out everything before the family finds them. 


i spent forever on that anjali part, making sure it sounded right.
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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 1:50pm | IP Logged
wow what an update
Is Natasha going to get a surgery to look like Khushi *SHOCKING*

Anjali is so FREAKING delusional *Not Surprised*

Damn someone's really been playing about and really wants her dead.
At least now she'll stop taking them.
Finally they're together!
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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 1:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ak_maggi

awww... i missed d contest... had prbs wid net connection last week...
hmm never mind.. may be next time...Smile
 
n Anjali is so dam sick! God save her...
natasha??? she is so obsessed.. plastic surgery??LOL
 
n Thank god Khushi is safe... n Arnav s pain wen she pulled away was so saddening... more than d physical hurt...
 
i love d way they find solace in each other...
 
awesome update...Thumbs Up

yeah, poor arnavCry
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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 1:54pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by luvraj4ever

loved the update...i love all the suspense and thrill in this fic...its totally different from any other fic i hv read soo far...for the first time i m not able to guess anything..and that thrillsme to no end...lol
loved all the arnav and khushi scenes...arnav making tea, then the sponge bath...i wonder why khushi pulled away??
then the reports...thankgod arnav came to know abut all this...
anjali is seriously mad...this amount of madness??she needs a doctor for sure...
can't wait for the next update...
cont soon

aww glad the suspense is workingEmbarrassed
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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 1:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SaRunLicious

OMG!!! Awesome awesome awesome update!!!!! Clap
I loved it! So Anjali is delusional..she thinks the woman in the shed is her! Silly
and Natasha going in for a plastic surgery? what the hell does this
#?@!# want?! Angry
aaand, am sure she's the one who made Khushi take those pills! Shocked
Waiting eagerly for the next chapter! Big smile

glad u liked it! anjali has a psychiatrist for a reason, too bad its not working thoOuch
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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 1:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ssafdar

 You are the queen of suspense!!!!!

Poor Kushi!!!! someone is trying to slowly poison her and trying to steal her man Angry 

Anjali is SICK!!!! watching her husband have sex with other women and saying khushi's name...her and Shyam both seem to live in cuckoo land Silly

aww thanks!Star and yes, anjali n shyam r really a perfect matchOuch

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