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FF: SHAMELESS #3, Link pg 151 (Page 149)

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 4:58pm | IP Logged
Aaahhhaaahhh! :p
This was amaaazing x

Now I know why you said you worked hard on this :)
It's just faab :D

Omgomgomg! You know what I have this feeling now that it maybe Anjali too. O.o the person whose trying to kill Khushi x_x

This is getting confusing but isn't that the fun for you guys ;) ;)
Keeping the suspence and troubling us :p ;) ;) Lol :)

Truly Tina I'm just in love...with this :) ;)

Can't wait for the next chapter now..as you've shown the precap my gutter minded brain is now activated...imagining what may happen *ahem ahem*

*sigh* don't have anything else to say! Just amazing x

Thanks for the PM babe x

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 5:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by avantika_2012

This is one of the best updates in terms of intensity. Brilliant job, absolutely. Keep it up!

Can't wait for the next update! ;-) :-P


Edit :

It has been just an hour or so...I'm already coming back to re-read this chapter LOL

BTW...that was my 400th postWink

aww that makes it special..i loved the intensity of this ch too
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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 5:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ipkknd_gbdfan

Anjali is just sick! She is in her room, looking at the live videos of her husband making out with someone, yet she thinks its her he is with!? I am still a virgin, but I bet that if you were actually doing *it*, you would feel something...so can't anjali tell that she's not the woman, cause she can't feel anything!? 

But nice update. I really want to know who is the woman...I know that it's someone that Mamiji talks to, so can't be Payal, and can't be Mamiji either...and she is tech savvy, with the tracking phone number stuff, so she is either Natasha or Dia. I'll have to go back and read the chapter when Arnav gets shot, to find more clues. :D 

But amazing!

anjali has serious problemsOuch so she really does believe in her head she was the woman with shyam
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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 5:54pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by chocolover98

Aaahhhaaahhh! :p
This was amaaazing x

Now I know why you said you worked hard on this :)
It's just faab :D

Omgomgomg! You know what I have this feeling now that it maybe Anjali too. O.o the person whose trying to kill Khushi x_x

This is getting confusing but isn't that the fun for you guys ;) ;)
Keeping the suspence and troubling us :p ;) ;) Lol :)

Truly Tina I'm just in love...with this :) ;)

Can't wait for the next chapter now..as you've shown the precap my gutter minded brain is now activated...imagining what may happen *ahem ahem*

*sigh* don't have anything else to say! Just amazing x

Thanks for the PM babe x

aww i love shameless so much myself, its my personal fav. but everyone seems to favor MGLOL. and that precap pic says everything doesn't itBlushing
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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 6:01pm | IP Logged
Hey Tina :)
I just read all 28 chapters in one go right now and I must say I'm absolutely hooked!
I can't wait to read more! 
I was already a fan of Mind Games and after reading this now I can't decide which one I like more! 

And the psycho woman after Khushi? The obvious suspects are Anjali and Natasha but I feel it's too obvious so maybe Dia? Hmmm!
And kudos to you for brilliantly portraying this ridiculously, frightening psychotic twisted Anjali! Its shiver worthy to read about her!

Continue soon Tina! I'm anxiously waiting to read more!

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 6:07pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Hot.Pink.Heels

Hey Tina :)
I just read all 28 chapters in one go right now and I must say I'm absolutely hooked!
I can't wait to read more! 
I was already a fan of Mind Games and after reading this now I can't decide which one I like more! 

And the psycho woman after Khushi? The obvious suspects are Anjali and Natasha but I feel it's too obvious so maybe Dia? Hmmm!
And kudos to you for brilliantly portraying this ridiculously, frightening psychotic twisted Anjali! Its shiver worthy to read about her!

Continue soon Tina! I'm anxiously waiting to read more!

omg wow, u read it all? so glad u liked itEmbarrassedyes, it's very different from MG..esp the character of anjali..

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 6:09pm | IP Logged
You are such a brilliant suspense writer! Each chapter leaves you hanging, thinking ab kya hoga?! Amazing job!!

Edited by AngelTeen - 25 September 2012 at 6:08pm
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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 7:17pm | IP Logged
Fantastic Update Clap
Very gripping & engaging!!
full of love, cute moments, hot dance, yet thrilling, every moment a feeling that when would be the next strike of hers!! what was that injection for..I mean would it be having effects later on??
the precap looks awesome WinkWink...continue soon Big smile

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