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FF: SHAMELESS #3, Link pg 151 (Page 130)

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 8:44pm | IP Logged
Tina awesome update...

Glad to see Khushi finally confiding in Arnav (and also fr me) why she was pulling away... 
the cliffhanger u left is going make waiting for the update difficult..

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 8:47pm | IP Logged
Mindblowing update
loved it
thanx 4 pm
continue soon

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 8:48pm | IP Logged
oh gosh what was khushi injected with??
dont make her fall dead after arnav make her his..Cry
this natasha is so annoying..why cant that bitch just back the hell off...Angry

i loved arnavs reaction..
all the emotions overwhelmed me..
please continue soon tina..
and make sure that bitch gets caught..
this is too much now..its time for her to rot in jail !!!Angry

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rjhaveri Senior Member
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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 8:48pm | IP Logged
Thanks for the much awaited update.  I am seriously hooked to this story.  Something in today's update got me thinking:  It's Natasha's sister who might be the killer, Natasha is too unbalanced to carry out a cool and collected game plan.  

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 8:49pm | IP Logged
OMG! My heart is still thudding! This was a great update. 
Except that I didn't like it that Arnav left her, in spite of knowing she is in danger! Yeah, I know he was hurt, but she did do that only for him. He should realize that. What if something had happened to her? How would he have lived with himself?? He needs to think about that, himself.
I think, by now you must have gathered, that I want Arnav to love Kushi so much, that he should do NOTHING wayward, nothing to hurt her or make her feel even the tiniest bit hurt, sad, fearful, alone... or any of the myriad of emotions that any human being feels when in danger. In effect, I want him to be her hero and eradicate all and any negativity surrounding her. Which, I realize he is trying to do, as best as he can. He is human, I know (I'm disappointed!!! I want him to be God for/to/of her!!!!! I want his love for her to be perfect! Heavenly! Is there such a thing, especially in the hell they are living in? Unrealistic much?)
I also hope he doesn't take her there and then (I mean have s--* with her, I won't call it love at this point, although he loves her, but if he is intimate with her here, then it's only s--* and not love. If he is true then he will wait, until they are at their home. I would love for him to lose total and absolute control over her, but only in the atmosphere of love, not anger or madness.) The moment should be special, and HE should make it special for her. On the other hand, if Natasha or any of the others sees them, then... I hope he is not drunk. How the hell can he save her if he is. What the hell was he thinking or was he?? She should be his first and ONLY concern. Especially after what they have just been through!! And even more especially after what the detectives just said to him!!! ARRGGHH!!
On another note, I loved how you made Kushi realize that what she did was wrong, that she should have talked it out with him, especially, seeing as to the situation they are in. But it's a bit desperate that she is offering herself to him like this. And yes, I realize desperate times call for desperate measures. 
I hope it's not anything dangerous (drugs??) or poisonous that she was injected with. I think only Natasha can be that evil, and she has the motivation, too. On the other hand, it could be the stupid sister, who proabably wants to get rid of Natasha, so she can have what Natasha has. Namely, the freedom to boss everyone around. With Natasha gone, or too busy with Arnav, Dia can...
I just cannot wait for the updates for Shameless. It's my favourite story. Please, please, don't take sooo long to update. I have been awaiting this update eagerly since Saturday! It's just tooo looong to wait for the next update!!
Thanks for PMing me. Big smile
PS
I do understand that you might (?? hehe!) have a life to lead, too! 
So thanks!
Sorry for this long comment, I just had to vent out my thoughts and feelings!!!

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 8:58pm | IP Logged
awesome and i hope the injection is not  poisonous.waiting for the next update

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 9:00pm | IP Logged
Omg awesome update, I can't wait for the figure to be exposed. Omg the precap, can't wait to read the next chapter. :)

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 9:00pm | IP Logged
and thread 4 ,,,here we come !!!!
yaaahooo !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Dancing

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