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"TILL HEAVEN FREEZES"

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" Till Heaven Freezes"




I heard your melodious whisper through the somber night

 

When you took my breath away for one last time

 

You held on to it with all of your might

 

Not knowing it was the last one I would breathe in my lifetime

 

My dear Geet, when you turned to gaze at me

 

My soul had already sunk in the deep ocean of your heart

 

I did not drift to the floor of the sea

 

For until this day, my hand is clutched to yours so that we will never part

 

I must admit that the ocean represented my tears

 

For I must have cried that much when I saw nothing but sorrow in your eyes

 

I couldn't bare waiting so many  years

 

Just to be able to touch you when your soul would finally arise

 

I felt so hopeless sitting beside you hearing your silent screams of despair

 

Trying to send you whispers through the wind which you could not hear

 

My arms gently gliding around your waist as your sobs filled the air

 

Hoping it was my voice that you thought had tickled your ear

 

My soul is at ease within the sunlight of bliss

 

For the Titanic still drifts between the waves reflecting our love

 

My passions echoes in the sunset where we shared our first kiss

 

As my eyes descend, devoted to you from above

 

My lovely geet , your reflection will soon lie with me

 

In the high heavens of the restless waters

 

Our devotion and love will forever flow freely

 

In a world where sorrow no longer shatters

 

My love, Titanic was the ship of dreams

 

Before our powerful love collided with destiny

 

But here I stand at the clock, overwhelmed with gleams

 

Tears running down my cheeks as your heart unites with me

 

We'l b together

 

"Till Heaven Freezes"

 




Edited by SandySheen - 29 November 2012 at 12:05am

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Edited by SandySheen - 29 November 2012 at 12:05am

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Wwow amazing start ... Loved the poem ... 

Continue soon 


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flawless starting
its the first part which brought tears in my eyes
loved it 4rm the core
waiting 4 the next part

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awsome start

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amazing start yaar..

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Sheeni i tell u this is the one movie with a sad ending which i can see again n again without a flinch on my face...i am actually mad n maniac for this love saga !! LOL what's new everyone is !!

Hushhh now would love to see how will u make it a sweet story with a lovely end...

N About Maan alive... Winkiesss do i need to tell yaa !!
Update soon shona !!

Love Ya

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Awesome Start !! Big smile !!

Cont Soon !!

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