ArHi SS: Dark Side- Chapt 8 Pg 45 *Updated* 30/8/13 - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Though I am keeping away from dark stories I am excited about reading this. 1) Coz I want to see how you will treat this. am sure it will be a treat to read. 2) Coz this is my area of interest. A character with a known disorder...
 
But since I know a little more of the story I want to see how Arnav helps Khushi overcome her past and Khushi accepting Arnav as her future.
 
And you showed the violence without making me feel like puking, Great ⭐️
 
 
Looking forward to quick updates 😊
 
 
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Posted: 11 years ago
simply fabulous.loved it,,,
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Posted: 11 years ago
@jessicad: Awesum n fantastic SS!!!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
wowww... i had wished you would continue this story sooner... but seriously this soon πŸ˜†... not that I'm complaining... thanks for continuing and giving us this mind-blowing chapter...

literally the description of Shyam  and his deeds scare me... you have painted him out to be too sinister... i hope our hero reaches the damsel in distress fast...

plz continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Holy crap Shyam is one deranged animal in this fic! But i love it :D LOL I knew Khushi setting up those candles and whatnot for Arnav was too good to be true. Great story, cant wait for the next update!

And btw, i love the song you based your story on!
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh boy not good not good at all
haila that was bad no terrifying for sure
damn and double damn he found her huh
and not only found her but took her away too
in all this arnie has no clue where khushi is or that she had been trying to contact him from so long
oh dear why did this have to happen
and it was all  trap for khushi
the contract was baseless
will he be able to find khushi now

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey!
 
I just came across this today and after reading the two chapters, I'm left a little numb.
 
I think my heartbeats have increased just by reading the second chapter and in particular, Shyam's filthy treatment of Khushi. The guy seriously needs professional help. 😑😑😑
 
Very well written and descriptive.
 
I cannot wait to read part three already! πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
RUNNN Khushi Run πŸ€—
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow that was an amazing start
argh shyam,,cant believe he put khushi through that
and hope arnav saves her=/