ArHi SS: Dark Side- Chapt 8 Pg 45 *Updated* 30/8/13 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
nycc os...conti soon 
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Posted: 11 years ago
I get you are trying to be evi here but you really don't need to leave us hanging at this point. C'mon! You have to give Arhi their happy ending!
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Posted: 11 years ago
waiting for the next part😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ooh this is really interesting .. How could you even ask to continue or not .. Please do soon.
So shyam is the past in Khusi's life. Hope Arnav comes soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
How dare you stop there. Why have you not continued this one yet?


I loved the plot. turn this into an FF please :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
please continue!

very nice concept and story!

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Posted: 11 years ago
Jess dearest this is SO good!

Khushi is emotionally in a wretched state (Has she been physically abused by Shyam?) and Arnav is there to support her. Accepting her dark side and giving his brighter one in return.

I liked the way you progressed from a completely disturbed Khushi to an accepting one. The batter scene was very poignant. Aren't little instances like these responsible for making us understand what we truly want?

F! Shyam is at her doorstep? And just when she is mentally ready to tell Arnav what she feels for him?

Girl I know you have exams and all. But you better update soon. Bas!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just love it! Very tensed storyline! Please update soon, and PM if you can 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
this is surely a story with suspense.. And why u left it there.. cliffhanger.. 
Arnav & Khushi best of freinds. There is something regarding Khushi's past thats still under wraps.. Interesting.. Now waiting for next update.. Please Pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow! loved it
looking forward to the next update 😊