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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 4:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by PrincessPatel77

Awesome update!
Loved it!
It was soo cute and adorable!
Haha, Arjun and Rathore were pulling Shree's leg! Awesome!
Continue asap and please include a lot of Ariya romance! ^_^
Thankf for the pm
pm me

Thank you!
Ariya scene coming up in the next one soonnn...Wink

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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 4:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -sree13-

Uff finaly everything is allright Smile Seriously Arjun & Rathod are so bad actor. they end up with laughter!!! Big smile

bechara shree. Arjun & Rathod ne kya class liya uska & he blarted out everything in innocent way Tongue

love the happy ending of this part with everyone. Update soon simar Smile


Everything is almost alright Tongue
Glad you liked the update...Big smile
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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 4:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by fatima15

brilliant update :) loved it
loved rathore's reaction when arjun told him that the guy is shree
rathore worried for tanvi :) how cute
riya, shree and anu making dinner for arjun that too his favorite dishes so that he can accept shree :)
arjun invited tanvi and sameer for dinner as well :)
loved when shree said is there a back door through which i can run away LOL
loved the part where rathore asked arjun whether cooking his favorite food will make him accept shree..
the way arjun and rathore pulled shree's leg was awesome  ROFL
loved shree's dialogue "Kaha phas gaya mein?!! Bakra bana kar khel rahe hain mujhse!" ROFL
poor shree  he was so scared of them that he blurted out everything LOL 
arjun and sameer accusing each other on whom started to laugh first
chotu and shree's conversation was so cute :)
chotu with neelima :)
finally shree is the part of the family :)
thanks for the PM :)
continue soon

Thank you for the lovely comment!!
Yup Shree is officially part of the family! Tongue
Next one coming up...



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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 4:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 123pritha

Awesome Job!


Thank youu!!  Big smile
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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 4:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 12pr

sorry for late comment

No need to be sorry! Glad you took the time out to comment!!

it was amazing

i like the convoy of rathod and arjun at sameer's home and i like the sameer's  concern for tanvi so much

and arjun teasing rathod and after that rathod told that "Tu rukh, jab Riya bhi..." and after read this line i am happy that they both friend's are now full on masti mood with serious mood

i like the way arjun made the full drama at riya's house and then they all laugh

i like the dialog of shree "Kya Shree?? Socha tha Arjun sir ko kaise bhi manaalonga, par Rathore sir? Maar denge yaar woh tho!!"

and then riya 's dilog is super cool vo tho phele sochna tha na 

and they both shree ko cooking karva rahi he abhi se na jane bad me kya hoga shree ka bichara shree sabhi aur se fas gaya hai

LOL he knew what he was getting himself into...

i like the dialog of riya that "Apna nautanki bass kar aur khana bana!!"

i like the convey of rathod shree and arjun so much it's too good and you pen down it beautifully

Thank Youu!!

i like the shree's mind voice you written it beautifully
"Kaha phas gaya mein?!! Bakra bana kar khel rahe hain mujhse!"

and then they both do not listen and gave a chance to speak shree something they both are playing with shree very happily

and then shree made his way and speak every thing in all in one go and then asked for permission to arjun and rathod

and after all this happens they both laugh and gave the permission to shree and anu

and ypii now shree is a family member

and the convoy of chotu and shree are too good

pls update soon and tnx for pm

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Thank you soo much for letting me know what all you liked in the update!!! I am glad you liked it!!! 



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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 4:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by yas23

awesome update
omg i can't belive i missed chapter23 i confuessed after reading chap 24
part23
finaly shree nd anu both confesed they love each other
loved shree 's expression on knwing everyone knws about anu loves excep him
part24
sameer nd arjun convo was amazing
sam taanvi scenes was cute
loved how arjun nd sameer pulled shree's leg
loved the way how shree told arjun nd sam about him anu
choru nd shree convo was nice
aww chotu nd neelima
continue soon
can't wait for the next part

haha it would be a bit confusing if you missed out on chap 23 Tongue  Glad you caught up on it and liked it!!
Thank you! ...and the next one is coming up soon...
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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 4:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shrutisweety

finially i have read all the updates 
loved the updates 
well written 
wounderful update and 
continue soon

Thank youu! Smile
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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 4:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by srividhya68

very lovelySmile

Thank you!!

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