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FF: Safe in his arms! Link to thread 2 added (Page 86)

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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 12:09am | IP Logged
[/QUOTE]  sshhhrreee,,,,,,ooww..poor guy...bechare ko almost maar dala tha arjun n rathod ne...Clap sahi h...brClapother's love!!!Star

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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 3:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tani23

Sorry Simar...kaan pakad kar sorry ...i seriously didnt knew ki u will make 1 more res

mujhe first aana thaLOL

LOL kaan pakad ne ki zaroorath nahi hain!! It's all good...no worries! Wink I love the enthu with which you are commenting!! Thanks heaps for that!!! I always look forward to reading what you thought of the updates!!

Now coming to chapter

i seriously loved both d parts..

Rathore worried for tanvi n arjun smiling nteasing him...hehehe.

Seriously loved d way dey planned things
At home, these 3 were making dinner for him ..so that he can accept shree in d family...
Arjun also playing along n calling rathore over dinner
n den finally d second part

i was ROFLing while reading shree's reaction..
bechara shree...waat laga di in dono ne uski
n his reaction..."anu please cum here"

n finally Sameer n Arjun couldn't control dere laughter 
even i was laughing dat tym
excellent part 

loved it
Finally shree is a part of d family ...
maze aa gaye ...

I am glad you liked both parts!!! After all the expectations for the Arjun-Shree-Rathore confrontation I was a bit nervous for this part! Tongue Thank you again for the lovely comment...



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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 3:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by haruhi26

very lovelySmile
it was very funny, the way Arjun and Rathore pulled Shree's legsLOL
and i loved the dialogue where Rathore asked Arjun whether cooking his favorite food can influence himLOL
and also when Shree was so scared, and just blurted out everythingLOL
and finally you ended on a very happy note for this updateBig smile
Please continueSmile

Thank you!! Big smile
I am posting the next one soon...
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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 3:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pihu_angad

awww..
they are really very badLOL
bechara Shree... 
kinna pareshaan kiya dono ne use.
awesome update..Star
continue soon..

pareshaan karna toh bantha tha Wink
Next one coming soon ...
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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 3:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Payal_156

Phew
simar dear
let me rofl pls...first!!
omg wat an update
laughing..
arjun sam teasing wow...
anu too gud...
claps
loved it
jitni taaref kru kam h..
awesum ff...
really enjoyable
thank u dear fr giving us d amazing ff..
u rock~!

Thank youuu!!! Big smile
I am glad you are enjoying it!
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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 3:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sips_crazy

Loved it ...

The whole update had such a feel good factor to it .. i had a smile on my face ...
 
RR were teasing shree and and finally the much awaited confrontation...its was such a kodak moment it was like the whole ETF family together ...
 
What i am glad about is that you included Chotu too , Shree didnt forget him ...Big smile
 
Please make sure that Arjun teases Riya also for hiding such things from him

I always meant this part to be light and on a happy note...
It couldn't have been a kodak moment without ChotuTongue
Thank you for the lovely comment...

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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 3:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by devildiva21

superb update yr...!!!
loved it...!!!
awww bechara shree...!!!! bahut mazze lie usse arjun aur sam ne...!!!LOLLOL
hahaha riya anu and shree cooking arjun's fav food to manofy him...!!! aur kitchen ki kya halat bna rakhi tiROFL
sam arjun convo was funny...!!!
love the way sam accused arjun  that he will always start fight with riya...!!!
tanvi and sam aree too cute..!! love the way sam was caring for tanvi...!!!
sam and arjun laughing and accusing each other on whom stared to laugh first ...!!! and destroyed the plan..!!!ROFL
love the way shree told the truth to arjun and sam...!!!
chotu shree convo was lovely...!!!
chottu enjoying with neelimaWink so chotu and neelima also joined at riya's house awsum..!!
continue soon...!!!
cant wait for the next part...!!!

I am glad you liked and enjoyed the update!
Thank you soo much!!
Next one coming soonnn...

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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 3:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Princeess07

Just read it...
Cooking Arjun's fav dish...to impress him..
Shree ka bakra bana diya...
Both ended up laughing...
That was awesome...
Continue soon..

Thank you!!! Smile

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