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Posted: 22 February 2013 at 6:56pm | IP Logged
Uff finaly everything is allright Smile Seriously Arjun & Rathod are so bad actor. they end up with laughter!!! Big smile

bechara shree. Arjun & Rathod ne kya class liya uska & he blarted out everything in innocent way Tongue

love the happy ending of this part with everyone. Update soon simar Smile

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Posted: 22 February 2013 at 11:16pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 22 February 2013 at 11:18pm | IP Logged
Awesome Job!

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Posted: 23 February 2013 at 6:33am | IP Logged
sorry for late comment

it was amazing

i like the convoy of rathod and arjun at sameer's home and i like the sameer's  concern for tanvi so much

and arjun teasing rathod and after that rathod told that "Tu rukh, jab Riya bhi..." and after read this line i am happy that they both friend's are now full on masti mood with serious mood

i like the way arjun made the full drama at riya's house and then they all laugh

i like the dialog of shree "Kya Shree?? Socha tha Arjun sir ko kaise bhi manaalonga, par Rathore sir? Maar denge yaar woh tho!!"

and then riya 's dilog is super cool vo tho phele sochna tha na 

and they both shree ko cooking karva rahi he abhi se na jane bad me kya hoga shree ka bichara shree sabhi aur se fas gaya hai

i like the dialog of riya that "Apna nautanki bass kar aur khana bana!!"

i like the convey of rathod shree and arjun so much it's too good and you pen down it beautifully

i like the shree's mind voice you written it beautifully
"Kaha phas gaya mein?!! Bakra bana kar khel rahe hain mujhse!"

and then they both do not listen and gave a chance to speak shree something they both are playing with shree very happily

and then shree made his way and speak every thing in all in one go and then asked for permission to arjun and rathod

and after all this happens they both laugh and gave the permission to shree and anu

and ypii now shree is a family member

and the convoy of chotu and shree are too good

pls update soon and tnx for pm

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yas23 Goldie
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Posted: 23 February 2013 at 8:30am | IP Logged
awesome update
omg i can't belive i missed chapter23 i confuessed after reading chap 24
part23
finaly shree nd anu both confesed they love each other
loved shree 's expression on knwing everyone knws about anu loves excep him
part24
sameer nd arjun convo was amazing
sam taanvi scenes was cute
loved how arjun nd sameer pulled shree's leg
loved the way how shree told arjun nd sam about him anu
choru nd shree convo was nice
aww chotu nd neelima
continue soon
can't wait for the next part

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Posted: 23 February 2013 at 8:40am | IP Logged
finially i have read all the updates 
loved the updates 
well written 
wounderful update and 
continue soon

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Posted: 23 February 2013 at 8:45am | IP Logged
very lovelySmile

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AeDilHaiMushkil IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 23 February 2013 at 11:42am | IP Logged
Hey Simar..

I've had a grin plastered on my face from the start to the very last word.. This one was a damn cute one.. The cuteness quotient is slowly increasing with every update..

Shree.. Shree.. My poor baby.. Itni Taang Khichayi? LOL LOL  Ab dono sarphire ACP's ki behen ke chakkar mein pad gaya toh kya kehna.. LOLWink  This was bound to happen..

I loved the way Rawte-Rathore both accepted him as a partner for Anu, while at the same time reminding him that his teeth would be knocked out if he made her cry.. WinkLOL

Awwiie.. Picture perfect family! Loved them.. Smile

P.S.: Can we have a cute scene between Arjun-Riya in the upcoming Parts.. where Arjun pretends to be angry with Riya for not having told him.. And Riya trying to make it up to him.. WinkLOLTongue

Only if that's possible..

Also, please reveal more on the stalker.. That bit is still under wraps which sounds scary!

Thanks for the PM, dear.. Smile

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