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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 4:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ashred12

nice ff...i tried watching d show but cudnt sit thru more than one epi...n arjun's indifference to riya killed my hopes for d pair...loving dis story...


Thank you! 

His indifference is just part of the package, he's like that with everyone though. Do give the show another go...it's really not that bad. Smile

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 4:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by srividhya68

Great update...


Thank you srividhya! 

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 4:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by life93

hi dear Hug
 sorry 4 not commenting on the last oneEmbarrassed...this update was an eventuaaly an roler coster both 4 me n ariya...loved the way she fight with her dad...well it was an inner turmiol for her...which she did really well...n he supported him...which was really so emotional...riya's dad reminded him of his pains which was unbearble for that was brilliantly written...for whuch she argumented with her father...last lines were so...brilliant...Clap update soon


Hey! Not a problem! Ya a few emotional outbursts from Riya in this update.

Thanks for the lovely comment! Smile
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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 4:30pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Leki

Brilliant update... Loved te way whole scene s potrayed... Riya's outburst on her dad ws the best part... cnt dat man tlk bit more sensibly... Ariya s really wonderful... loved the way she stood for Arjun nd her love... Arjun wow i'm amazed he dnt loose his cool... great part... update soon...

Thank you!
haha there is a lot of hatred for Riya's dad at the moment. Hope you'll see the sensible side of him soon...


Originally posted by arul01

that was a emotional update... mr mukherjee seems to fast on the judging part! he doesn't know arjun at all and he is being judgmental... surprisingly, arjun seem calm... wow! he really loves riya a lot! please update soon! the story is getting more and more interesting! can't wait to read more! looking forward to the next update!

Thank you!!
I'll update soon! Smile


Originally posted by sips_crazy

Hats off to a calm Arjun ClapClap..

Coming to the FF , the confrontation between Riya & her father is very well potrayed .
 
To me, the confrontation was helpfully as Riya was able to finally let go all her supressed emotions and it cleared all things for her father regarding Arjun ...
Also we get a glimpse of Riya past ...esp her mothers death  where she left ,waiting for her husband ...and i guess this really makes Ri strong
 
The way Arjun told her to not let her father go ..shows the brillance of his character ...
 
Lets see the aftermath of this confrontation ...
 
P.S- Anu & Shree were save again ...LOL..


Thank you for the lovely comment!! Big smile

I promise you'll see more Anu and Shree soon...and the moment a lot of you have been waiting for!! 


Originally posted by Queen.Bee

brilliant!!!

i always thought her father would end up saying something like this!! loved her outburst.. feels bad for riya n her mom..

update soon!! hope riya's dad man jayega!!

but i am shocked to see such a calm arjun!! Shocked

More to come of Riya's dad...hmm Arjun stayed calm coz Riya had to vent out her anger Tongue
Stay tuned and thank you for the comment!!


Originally posted by Radhika Shah

Great update!


Thank You!! Big smile



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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 4:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -sree13-

I love this update & Riya's outburst to her dad. He is such a irritating person & deserved to listen all this from his own daughter. Even I wonder how could Arjun control himself?? lets see what did you plan for next chap.

Thanks for taking time and commenting!! Big smile.
Arjun controlled his anger for Riya...more of that in coming chaps...


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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 4:40pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by vidya.anand

Awesome post..emotional one
cont soon!

Thank you!! Smile


Originally posted by kunchu

emotional chapter... beautifully written
keep it up dear...

Thank You kunchu! Smile


Originally posted by Gurmeet4Drashti

Hey ...
That was fantastic :)
Awww Arjun is just adorable ... The cop who couldn't hear when someone use to say anything about his past and just snap at that person is right now sooo calm :-)

Riya's emotional outburst was very good :(

Hehe Riya's influence on him!! Tongue
Thank You!!


Originally posted by Krishnaluv94

What an update...Riya was brilliant! I can't wait to read more! Thanks for the update! 

Big smile Thanks a lot!! I'll update the next part soon!!



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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 4:59pm | IP Logged
Nice update..
Loved it..

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 5:21pm | IP Logged
Dear
love d caring side of ariya fr each other
riya n her dad uff..
amazing writer u r
keep d wrk lyk dis
all d best
thanx fr d pm dear

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