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FF: LEGAL SINS THread 4 Pcp pt 21 - Page 131 (Page 70)

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 6:42pm | IP Logged
Loved it .I am not very ggod in commenting all I can write now is more than actual episode i wait for your updates.Thanks for all the interesting stories. I wonder where do u get all the Ideas u r amazing writer.

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 7:08pm | IP Logged
Awww...

hopefully a hot part coming up  Tongue
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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 7:55pm | IP Logged
I dont like maya's behaviour with khushi .. Hope she will accept the fact soon...

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 9:09pm | IP Logged
Nice imagination u got there. Luv the suspense u keep in ur stories.
Had a dialogue in mind for this ff if u could formulate a scene around.
Khushi asking ASR if he could be intimate with anyone n everyone.
Well just a suggestion.

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 9:25pm | IP Logged
Ok. Where to start. First I guess is awesome update.
She finally is reading the contract properly.
Wish she had done that in the first place but then she may not have married Arnav.
What she did she did for her family. If only they were there for some support.
She needs it.
Arnav is shocking himself by giving Khushi time. He's so confused.
Well so more flashbacks from their first night.
It is written in the contract she won't get pregnant.
Wonder what elseis written.
Can't wait for the next part.
Thanks for the pm.

Edited by rashika - 05 September 2012 at 9:51pm

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 9:27pm | IP Logged
Arnav has fallen for her though thats very slight. Or else why would he ask Khusi's permission?Thanks for a Maya-free update. This Laad Governess is damn irritating.But Khusi why did she give up so easily that day? May be she was afraid n confused to make out the gravity of his deeds.Their marriage is for six months. Khusi is not allowed to be pregnant which means a heir to Raizada family is not the reason for this contract. Then why this marriage? Does he really need a wife to fulfil his lust? Any random high-profile model is not enough?After all he didnot even know till 13 th day of his marriage who his contract wife is... She could be a ugly girl unlike Khusi. Would he made love to her also? What he is doing is condemnable, incorrigeble for Khusi n a damn inhuman activity too.Everything legal n permitted are not necessary to be done. ASR is a jerk. He is treating a girl like Khusi as a prostitute. I can never neglect his brutal actions if he even knelt down to her and apologise to Khusi n his apology is accepted by her. ASR is a criminal though without no legal crime.Waiting eagerly for the precap.Do continue soon.Thanks a lot for the PM.               Love you,Take care.                      -SHUCHI

Edited by SanchayitaM - 05 September 2012 at 10:03pm

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 9:30pm | IP Logged
awesome update loved it he ask her if she needs time n the flashback of their first night loved it khushi asking if she can get pregnant he was gentle with her n taking precautions cant wait to read more loved the update

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