Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

VirMan FF |Hate How Much I Love You| Part 5 Pg 19 - Page 15

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Posted: 11 years ago
Really ... u r damn too gud at portraying emotions 
Loved every bits of your update 
Continue soon and thx for the pm 
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was a beautiful update...every emotion in there was perfect!!
Loved it...to the core!! <33
You described it beautifully...and the kiss at the end..oh my...that was just...i can't think of the right word...as you said, everything was there...the love, pain, desire, passion, unspoken tales...<33
And it was a long update...=D
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Posted: 11 years ago
Reading something faab after a quite a few days of browsing :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Every Emotion Beautifully Portrayed
Both Equally Pained By Seperation
Virat's Pained By Manvi's Rejection,By Jealousy And By Betrayal
Whereas, Manvi Is Pained By Seperation Frm Virat, By Seeing Virat Hurt And Loss Of Love
Poor VirMan
Amazing Totally Loved It
Update Soon And PM Me Please
Thanksz x
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was very nice...a long update...thks 4 de pm...continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
very interesting story
very emotional yet strong
Pls update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Its an amazinggg storyyy
i really luved it...
Plzzz update asap
nd pm me
wen u update next..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey this is Nandita!
I have read your first update...first i thought that i will read all the updates you have updated till now & then i will comment, but after reading intro & first part...i just couldn't stop myself to comment!!!! 😃

You have given an excellent start & i am sure rest of the parts will be as good as it was!!!!
Will comment as soon as i will read all of them!!!

But till then, i would say keep updating & add me in your PM list also...will be waiting!!!!! 😃