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SS: Becoming A Father *UPD Last Part* Pg 139 (Page 89)

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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 10:11am | IP Logged
wow
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 a long update .
when people he loved left him, they didn't come back?... this pricked my heart somewhere dear...

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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 10:54am | IP Logged
I can not tell you how much I love this story.  I read it every morning at 6:30 with my morning chai.  Please don't end it anytime soon. You have captured the true heart of Khushi and Arnav!

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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 11:06am | IP Logged
Update was too good
Khushi and arnav both are feeling miserable without each other. But both of them are equally stubborn. I agree with you, both khushi and aranv were right in the argument which they had. But both of them need each other.
The precap was very interesting...poor aman is going to have a heart attack. ASR has alreadys started looking for pre-schools
please continue soon

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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 11:10am | IP Logged
i see the growing attachment for the "foetus" lol, bless him, he really doesnt know what to do. but i cant wait fro the next one :)

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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
Great. Update soon. Thanks
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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 12:08pm | IP Logged
lovely update... wonder how these two stubborn people are going to work things out when they expect the other to make the first move... loved the precap, with arnav discussing babies with a flabbergasted aman... at least now the baby is something real enough for arnav to be thinking of playschools... aman must be really confused

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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 12:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Siaa-

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The first thing that came to my mind after reading this chapter was what if I'd never found this story? What if I never came across it? Seems a a bit overboard I know but I jus can't help wondering!!


Hats off to you woman,  for developing a story so intricately and highlighting the nuances of relations so wonderfully!! And I'm loving it as it rides high on emotions :)

I do really accept that my heart is treacherous!! His outburst was wrong and even more was it's timing but for a man like ASR, I do believe it's normal to do so and even more from his POV!!! I loathed him for speaking so badly with Khushi but as soon as I read this when people he loved left him, they didn't come back? , my heart did a flip-flop and here I am weeping for him even he'd said those horrible things to poor Khushi..I really do feel sad for him!!

Aww...they are angry at each other nah damn mad at each other and yet in the midst of all this she worries for him, she feels for him, both want the other other to pacify them..Aw..that's what love is ain't it?!


Nani is definitely a smart woman and no doubts as to whay she is the 'Nani' and PAyal is a loving sister...I wonder if Aman thought if the ASR had grown some horns or might be it's one of his craziest hallucinations?! :P


Thank you! Thank you for everything you wrote! Thank you!Hug

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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 12:30pm | IP Logged
Loved it..Clap
Can't see them in this condn..Cry
Hope thy patch up soon..Big smile
Precap was awesome...Wink
Finding abt 11 weeks old feutus...and even pre-school..wow...LOL
Thanks for the pmTongue

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