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SS: Becoming A Father *UPD Last Part* Pg 139 (Page 75)

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 9:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jahnvi.luvs.ASR

Lovely update...making him understand what a father figure is...its beautiful...what i dint like was khushi never said OUR baby...she always say MY baby...hope to understood what i wanna say...thanks for pm:-)


Didn't you notice, Khushi stopped saying 'our' baby since the night she realized, Arnav associated to the baby through herself. She will again say, 'our' baby when Arnav learns to say it.. Otherwise what's the point of forcing him by saying it over & over?!

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 9:20am | IP Logged
KEEP UP the gr8 work ur producing

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 9:53am | IP Logged
wow
amazng 
loved it
thnx fr d pm

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 11:03am | IP Logged
Craving for an update...LOL

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 11:08am | IP Logged
I have no idea why you prefaced the last update with a note indicating you were trying to hurry up the story.  You seem to be hitting your stride here.  this was a great update.

Keep going.  

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 11:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by segad

I have no idea why you prefaced the last update with a note indicating you were trying to hurry up the story.  You seem to be hitting your stride here.  this was a great update.

Keep going.  

I am not trying to hurry up the story. But it is a short story. I knew how it was gonna end when I started it. I outlined it consisting of 10 parts. Then, Anjali happened.Angry I threw away my outline. & then ArShi kinda took over. & then I wondered am I just dragging it out without any story?!! SO I apologized to the readers, if I annoyed someone who wanted a classic small story. I again made an outline, & that's what I wrote there.

Thank you for liking the story!Smile

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 11:55am | IP Logged

loved it

just awesome

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 3:17pm | IP Logged
Nice

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