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SS: Becoming A Father *UPD Last Part* Pg 139 (Page 52)

lovelyangel Senior Member

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 6:48am | IP Logged
You portrayed the relationship between Arnav and Khushi in a brilliant way.Their relationship is strong because for them everything blurs when it comes to emotions and feelings of their partner.So,here Khushi is more important than his di,i believe there should be such change occuring when partners are so much in love.Wonderful theme,can't wait for Arnav's becoming a father in a true sense.And ofcourse Khushi is very much capable to bring this change because wasn't she the one who transformed rutless,angry young business tycoon who believed neither in marriage and nor in god to a caring and loving husband.Looking forward to this change.

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Jyo.Arshi.IPK IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 6:55am | IP Logged
loved it dear Clap
fab upd !!!!
i loved how khushi fought for her baby...made arnav understand how much the baby meant to her !!!

now i want arnav to fall in love with his baby as much as he is in love with khushi !!!!

no mateer how much u love ur sis...u dont just give ur baby away !!!!!!!!!!!

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sakthi25 Senior Member

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 7:37am | IP Logged
woah! your story and your version of Arshi are incredible!

Arnav, you have to learn more...

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Maddy1270 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 7:39am | IP Logged
a beautiful update, handled in a mature and realistic fashion... loved how khushi lit into arnav revealing how much that baby meant to her as well as arnav's realisation of how his unthinking promise to anjali nearly destroyed khushi... though a confrontation, it was needed to reveal their real feelings and fears... also loved how they say things in anger but quickly realise how that much hurt the other and then try to remedy the situation... the scene where khushi breaks down and can't seem to stop and arnav's attempts to pacify her was heart-rending and heart-warming at the same time... the precap was beautiful... can't wait for the update!

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sman IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 8:08am | IP Logged
one of the best SS..great going

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jahnvi.luvs.ASR IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 8:09am | IP Logged
An amazing wrote it so beautifully...yupp that was exactly we needed at this moment...a strong khushi who does not give up her self respect for ppl who dont know how to respect neither themselves nor others...and yeah i too agree with the fact that you stated in your ff...that arnav still is not attached with the baby and that is what am looking forward to read...thanks for pm:)

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Sunshine Girl IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 8:38am | IP Logged
Awww this part was too adorable <333
Loved every bit of it...Arhi fight was intense and hawt !!!
M feeling so awsm at Khushiz determination...this FF is gng gr8 !!!

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---Sonia--- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 8:49am | IP Logged
Ow, l like itSmile  very nice update continue soon and thanks for pm me 

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