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SS: Becoming A Father *UPD Last Part* Pg 139 (Page 51)

seven_stars Goldie

Joined: 31 May 2011
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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 7:01am | IP Logged
i love love this part !! love the way asr express that he cant snatch away his khushi's happiness !! <3 <3 

wonderful! i hope anjali wont do something bad which cause khushi pain. 

u are such a great writer. update very soon. 

p.s.- loved the precap! <3 

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-Xpress- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 7:17am | IP Logged
Thank god that anjali didnot show a negative response... and hope that arnav saying her baby will change to Our baby soon.. loved the update.. awesome

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baRunmYlove21 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 30 July 2012
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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 8:01am | IP Logged
Mindblowing update !!Smile
LOVED IT Embarrassed

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Maddy1270 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 29 January 2012
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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 8:02am | IP Logged
a truly awesome update! love the maturity you show in your writing with all the expressions just so and no scene that can be termed over-the-top! hats off to arnav for putting things plainly before anjali and not laying any blame on khushi for refusing to give up her baby... though anjali seemingly understood, can't help but fear that she has some scheme brewing in that manipulative little mind of hers! hope I am wrong
those ultrasound scenes really made my day, especially arnav giving the doctor the third degree and the latter's annoyed reply Big smile... but it is khushi's ultimatum that really cracked me up: "If I have to go through a Transvaginal ultrasound because of your pompousness, I guarantee you, you are not getting any transvaginal actions from me anytime soon! Do you get that?"  LOL wish i could have seen arnav's face!
always been a fan of sensible communication between protagonists and that is what one gets in your story... looking forward to the next update disclosing arnav's fears about his upcoming fatherhood!

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jahnvi.luvs.ASR IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 8:15am | IP Logged
Well to your question i dont have slightest idea of how to convince this delicious and moreover emotionally broken stubborn man of joy one feel in state of sorry on that account...and apart from that the update was unpredictable...amazingly written...i love this strong willed...thanks for sharing your story with us...thanks for pm too:-)

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prerna1 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 8:59am | IP Logged
wow great part
liked Arnav and anjali convo
fianlly arnav refused her
liked it
continue soon

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Sunshine Girl IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 9:16am | IP Logged
Awww I simply loved this well Arnav handled the matter...everything went so writing...!!!
Khushiz hormones are running wild like literally...loved this dialogue of hers !!!
Or do you reserve these nuisances of yours only for me?"

Super SS...keep gng !!!

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dazzling_glory IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 10:26am | IP Logged
Awesome part...loved it
It was a relief to read that arnav has refused Anjali, while standing up for khushi's happiness. He does not have the right to ask for this sacrifice. The scene at the hospital was very nice. aranv was acting like a paranoid husband out of his nervousness. khushi is right, a mother gets attached to a child before the father. Arnav should relax and enjoy the moment which he is about to experience
continue soon

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