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SS: Becoming A Father *UPD Last Part* Pg 139 (Page 34)

SamiyaIPKKND IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 3:33am | IP Logged
Hell!!! Poojali asked for their baby!!! I hope Khushi in no way gives up her baby... thats really brutal!! Cruel!!!

Awesome update dear...can't wait for the next part

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 3:40am | IP Logged
had a suspicion all was not well between dadi and khushi... sorry, don't understand this point of view where a baby seems to be a parcel that can be gifted as and when one pleased... why should love be so one-sided? still as I don't know what arnav or khushi might do, I would rather reserve comment on this particular aspect of the story... hope we aren't in for angst and copious tears here, too!
 
the family taking care of khushi was nicely written, especially mami's reminiscences and mama's comments... the payal-khushi scene was adorable and heart-warming

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 3:52am | IP Logged
what the??? amjali s asking arshis child for her...dis s too bad...will he accept??thn wat abt the mother kushi??update soon the nxt part n PM me i cant wait further...

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 3:55am | IP Logged
I knew it the manipulative cow and the eternal fool but I have lots of hope from your Khushi so I am eagerly waiting for the next part to see Khushi's reaction but u know Arnav will be a fool or rather a bloody fool if he even suggests that to Khushi it's her baby and u know it doesn't even matter if it's or second a baby is a baby and u don't go distributing your child like that... Anjilli's reasoning is a load of crap as Khushi was raised by someone else bcz her parents died and so did their own parents that's why they came to live with their grand parents and Arnav and Khushi r alive so why should they give their baby away... I really want Khushi to give a piece of her mind to Arnav and anjilli both this time and that too without crying or being apologetic bcz a weak mother can destroy a child's life like nobody else can.

Farah hats off to you for writing such a brill story and I really can't wait till tomorrow for the next part... I am totally hooked to this story so plz update the next part ASAP.

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 3:59am | IP Logged
Just caught up with the story again...it's really going well. I can't believe the audacity of Anjali!! How can she expect to have Khushi's baby? I really don't want Khushi to be the sacrificial lamb anymore, she need to be strong. A bit selfish maybe. Why can't Anjali find a new husband and start a family again. Why does Arnav and Khushi always have to sacrifice for her. How can she even dream of taking away Khushi's happiness? How selfish can one get?

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 4:09am | IP Logged
as expected
 from a selfish ANJALI
& FROM VERY LOVING ARSHI

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 4:25am | IP Logged
Precap is scary.. I hope that Khushi puts in some sense in her.. I will wait for the next part to assume anything..

Beautifully written

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 4:29am | IP Logged
OMFGGG, Poor Khushi, She Has Also Suffered So Much & Now She Has To Give Her Baby When She Was So Happy :(( Broken Heart

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