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SS: Becoming A Father *UPD Last Part* Pg 139 (Page 149)

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Posted: 09 October 2012 at 11:16pm | IP Logged
Wow...read d whole story...wonderful...Smile

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Posted: 09 October 2012 at 11:39pm | IP Logged
loved this ff...read it all at one go...that was a wonderful journey

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Posted: 10 October 2012 at 3:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by inajnar

This was stupendous !! I read this in one go and it was a wonderful journey indeed.
You have so rightly brought out the little nuances that make up Arnav and Khushi.  
This story is worth seeing onscreen .
Beautiful !!


Aww!!Thank you!You think it's so good that it's worth seeing onscreen??Big smile

Thank you!Hug

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Posted: 10 October 2012 at 5:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by farah53

Originally posted by inajnar

This was stupendous !! I read this in one go and it was a wonderful journey indeed.
You have so rightly brought out the little nuances that make up Arnav and Khushi.  
This story is worth seeing onscreen .
Beautiful !!


Aww!!Thank you!You think it's so good that it's worth seeing onscreen??Big smile

Thank you!Hug

Yes...Most Stories of the Future depict everything as hunky dory which is nice but sounds a bit too good to be true..
Your Story seems to perfectly capture the changes in ASR - as he he prepares to take on his role as a father. And i think it would look  great  on screen !!Smile

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Posted: 11 October 2012 at 8:04am | IP Logged
chalo ji.. read it all in one go ..loved it too much..

i loved how you did not made khushi all sacrificing and
loved more to make her fight for her and her kiddo..

loved Arnav .. you have kept his character and ohh i love you so much for that, you know i first read the epilogue and then the whole SS and i enjoyed every bit.. Clap


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Posted: 13 October 2012 at 10:23am | IP Logged
Stumbled upon your SS earlier today and just read it all in one ago.
The scenario of Arnav learning about fatherhood was brilliant. The pregnancy journey was well described.
 
You write really well.
 
All in all, I loved it.

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Posted: 13 October 2012 at 12:43pm | IP Logged
Samiya has suggested me this story. I will read it and drop in my comments soon :)

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Posted: 13 October 2012 at 1:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by lazyleaves

Samiya has suggested me this story. I will read it and drop in my comments soon :)


Lucky you!!She never suggests me any stories to read!Cry

All she ever suggested me was to write another part for some stupid random OS!CryCry(Just kidding SamiyaLOLHug)

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