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SS: Becoming A Father *UPD Last Part* Pg 139 (Page 147)

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 12:57pm | IP Logged
Hawww.. Loved the last part.. Their jalebi is as cute as them.. Im gonna miss this.. all the best for your future work..

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 3:20pm | IP Logged
read it in a go
beautiful that is all am capable of saying when i read it
from being enemies to friends to lovers to being husband and wife they have come a long way to become parants of lil arshi or jalebi as her mother calls her
this journey to make arnav realise the importance of being a father has been full of challenges unheveals slight separation and then reunion
and hence closes a beautiful chapter in their lives with their kiddo and them together
wow that was such a beautiful peice portraying the feelings and emotions of arhi and others perfectly
thanx for this ss and hope you come back with more soon

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 4:20pm | IP Logged
beautiful ending
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 5:33pm | IP Logged
Amazing story with an amazing ending! Great job!

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Posted: 28 September 2012 at 7:47am | IP Logged
Really a perfect ending for this beautiful story. I loved the last part specially where once again Arnav made the promise and Khusi understood.
I just loved this story ...

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Posted: 28 September 2012 at 12:32pm | IP Logged
Farah!!!!!An amazing end to the storyClap
Loved ur story frm the starting...Big smile
Thanks for giving ur this one...Wink
Thanks for the pmWink

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Posted: 29 September 2012 at 12:24am | IP Logged
Just read last two parts! I can't tell you how beautiful this SS was!!! one of the best I have read and every word chosen best! perfectly and brilliantly written!
 
Last two parts were just extra amazing and adorable seeing Arnav as a father!! I hope we get to see something like this in the show one day! Embarrassed
 
Two things touched me in these two parts...in part 20 when arnav brought the stars and said kiddo needs to be near her grandparents! that was an adorable and touching moment...and the last paragraph arnav talking about heaven in his arms in last part!! so heart touching!!
 
Take a bow for this amazing work!! ClapClapClaploved it throughout! Hope to read more from you!Smile
 
Thanks for the pmSmile


Edited by SaRunForevertgr - 29 September 2012 at 12:25am

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Posted: 30 September 2012 at 1:10pm | IP Logged
great superb part

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