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SS: Becoming A Father *UPD Last Part* Pg 139 (Page 145)

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 6:32am | IP Logged
That was just beautiful Hug

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 6:38am | IP Logged
awesomee updateee,...
happy endinggg...
thnx 4 pmBig smile

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 8:52am | IP Logged
OMG Farah this was sooo adorable and beautifully written <333 Arnav being all daddy sounds more hotter...Wink..these were my favourite lines of awl update...Embarrassed...I love it when a baby grips ur finger tight...Heart...

she started watching her father's garden in the night time, turning her little head this way & that way, with her small button like brown eyes. Arnav inserted his index finger in one of her hands & she gripped it tightly. His eyes twinkled with pride


Ufff Jalebi is sucha cute nick for their doll...awww I cant believe Khushi calling her jalebi actually sounds super cute and adorableee...it gives the idea of her being chubby lil sweet dolll...
Faraahhh PLEASEEE do write an epilogueee...where jalebi is a tad bit older..may be walking...please pleaseee...

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 8:59am | IP Logged
very nicely done.  looking forward to the next one

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 10:06am | IP Logged
a beautiful conclusion to a beautiful yet highly realistic story... loved seeing arnav being a hands-on dad and how engrossed he's is in his daughter... also loved the moments of togetherness and contentment embodied in their last words to each other!

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 10:13am | IP Logged
cute cute cute cute!!!!
it was just lovely...one of my fav SS on if!!!!!1
really...fab story...fab writting sence...and everything perfect!!!
superb!

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 10:37am | IP Logged
loved it! great ending

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 10:42am | IP Logged
A perfect ending...but i cannot stop my self from saying that i wish you would have considered continuing with the fanfic further.
i have enjoyed reading all the part..and the end was a treat to see khushi and arnav having a perfect family in their arshi. Indeed if this is not heaven then what is.
thanks for sharing this story with all of us. Do let me know if you decide to write a new FF.
Take care

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