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SS: Becoming A Father *UPD Last Part* Pg 139 (Page 135)

shonagudia IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 5:25am | IP Logged
This is just a perfect piece of work.. I really wish i could have started the journey much before so i could tell you what a wonderful writer you are and what an awesome job you have done with this...
Arnav really had come a long way in this story becoming a father. I laughed imagining him to show his baby's snapshot in his office. LOL so much that Aman has to call Khusi to stop that..
The nursery was beautifully decorated. The color combination was perfect n beautiful.And when Arnav gifted the star saying the importance to Khusi i really had tears in my eyes.. I am so in love with this Man..

It's sad that it's ending but please keep writing ...

pup03 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 5:41am | IP Logged
magnanimous update...Star ...feels so good to read are ending...please do not do so...please continue for some will get the ideas...we know...happy writing and thanks for such a beautiful angle and making our ARSHI so happy to be together...Big smile 
__blossom__ IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 5:58am | IP Logged
That was amazing...
Arnav taking the photo through out the office god...that totally cracked me up!
Great update...
Nursery was so beautiful!
Loved it!
-Siaa- Goldie

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 6:14am | IP Logged
The best part of this chapter was the way in which "Love" has been described. ASR, an epitome of great richness, the possessor of luxuries could have "displayed" his affection towards Khushi in various ways but all he did was shower undivided love and care on her in simple, small, little gestures and I thinks it's the major shift from being ASR to Di's Chote to Khushi's Arnavji. That's what exactly you'd promised us at the beginning and I'm so really glad to see this transition:) Be it the way he accompanies her even though he has a horde of women pulling his leg, or the way he just let go off his black coffeee, or how he along with the family planned the entire room and those stars, hte special gift by him, in each and everything all that can ever see his immense love for her...Btw I too love you , Arnav, dammit!!!

The thought behind him giving her those stars was so heart-whelming!! 

Loved the way you described the tiniest of emotions, those li'l nuances and no wonder the story stands apart :)

One more update?! Ouch I'm being rude but really only one more? May be an epilogue or two? :)

Edited by -Siaa- - 25 September 2012 at 7:39am

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-Xpress- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 7:05am | IP Logged
It was really  very  cute and beautiful part...fabulous..

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snoopy84 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 7:36am | IP Logged
awww that was beautiful loved the room and the idea of the star mobile

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great_love Goldie

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 9:00am | IP Logged

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 9:21am | IP Logged
Awww Farah thnx for mentioning my nameHug..u dun kno how much I LOVE this ff...I thoroughly enjoyed reading it...and the last part was too good seriously...u portrayed each and every emotion so amazingly...there wasnt a single line where I cud find any fault...I jsut wanted it to go forever and ya u mentioned the yatch scene,,,God that scene still give me now coming to this part...these lines were hilarious ...ROFL The mightly ASR smitten by a bay that to unborn for that matter...
to the absolute horror of his employees, in his office, & showing off his little angel's beautiful features to everyone

The nursey is sooo beautiful..typical ASR style...Arnav can be nothing if nt stylish...Next part is last *gulps* ...God m addicted to this SS..vil miss it so much...plx make the last part a bit longer and strt thinkin of another concept...u HAVE TO write another FF or an SS...

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