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SS: Becoming A Father *UPD Last Part* Pg 139 (Page 130)

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Posted: 28 September 2012 at 7:47am | IP Logged
Really a perfect ending for this beautiful story. I loved the last part specially where once again Arnav made the promise and Khusi understood.
I just loved this story ...

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farah53

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Posted: 28 September 2012 at 12:32pm | IP Logged
Farah!!!!!An amazing end to the storyClap
Loved ur story frm the starting...Big smile
Thanks for giving ur this one...Wink
Thanks for the pmWink

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Posted: 29 September 2012 at 12:24am | IP Logged
Just read last two parts! I can't tell you how beautiful this SS was!!! one of the best I have read and every word chosen best! perfectly and brilliantly written!
 
Last two parts were just extra amazing and adorable seeing Arnav as a father!! I hope we get to see something like this in the show one day! Embarrassed
 
Two things touched me in these two parts...in part 20 when arnav brought the stars and said kiddo needs to be near her grandparents! that was an adorable and touching moment...and the last paragraph arnav talking about heaven in his arms in last part!! so heart touching!!
 
Take a bow for this amazing work!! ClapClapClaploved it throughout! Hope to read more from you!Smile
 
Thanks for the pmSmile


Edited by SaRunForevertgr - 29 September 2012 at 12:25am

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Posted: 01 October 2012 at 2:38am | IP Logged
i loved your story and writing...missing it actually...
won't you write anymore?...
when will u start another?...
pls do another soon...as cute as this one...
more stories like this one...

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farah53

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 10:49pm | IP Logged
Lovely FF.
Thank u.

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Posted: 05 October 2012 at 2:10pm | IP Logged
super storyy Smile

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farah53

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Posted: 07 October 2012 at 9:55pm | IP Logged
Hi I just read the entire SS in one go...this was an amazing piece of work..cant believe I didnt come across it earlier..truly awesome

Could you please please PM me when you write anything else? thanks

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Posted: 09 October 2012 at 7:53pm | IP Logged
This was stupendous !! I read this in one go and it was a wonderful journey indeed.
You have so rightly brought out the little nuances that make up Arnav and Khushi.  
This story is worth seeing onscreen .
Beautiful !!

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