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SS: Becoming A Father *UPD Last Part* Pg 139 (Page 127)

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 5:54am | IP Logged
That was a beautiful ending! Loved the story!

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 6:18am | IP Logged
wow dear such a cute and amazing ending ...really awesome !!! ClapClapClap
I want you to write more and more ...SmileSmile
loved your updates EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 6:20am | IP Logged
Loved it!! 

What an ending!! That was beautiful; a perfect family, a perfect ending..


TO say I loved would be an understatement!!

Finally we have Arnav at peace with himself and he's such a loving, doting, caring father and so is Khushi. I love that banter b/w them. Arshi, she's one lucky girl to have such a family!! 

Against all odds, they fought and they retained...and now a complete bliss in the form of a daughter and life goes on for them!! A memorable ending, that 'forever and always' was just too good!! I read tht line again and again!!


I'll definitely miss this story a lot, a lot!! I do really hope that you come up with many more stories :)
And not to forget, thanks a lot for those pm's :)

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 6:29am | IP Logged
It was a beautiful ending ... and awesome ss





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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 6:32am | IP Logged
That was just beautiful Hug

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 6:38am | IP Logged
awesomee updateee,...
happy endinggg...
thnx 4 pmBig smile

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 8:52am | IP Logged
OMG Farah this was sooo adorable and beautifully written <333 Arnav being all daddy sounds more hotter...Wink..these were my favourite lines of awl update...Embarrassed...I love it when a baby grips ur finger tight...Heart...

she started watching her father's garden in the night time, turning her little head this way & that way, with her small button like brown eyes. Arnav inserted his index finger in one of her hands & she gripped it tightly. His eyes twinkled with pride


Ufff Jalebi is sucha cute nick for their doll...awww I cant believe Khushi calling her jalebi actually sounds super cute and adorableee...it gives the idea of her being chubby lil sweet dolll...
Faraahhh PLEASEEE do write an epilogueee...where jalebi is a tad bit older..may be walking...please pleaseee...

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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 8:59am | IP Logged
very nicely done.  looking forward to the next one

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