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SS: Becoming A Father *UPD Last Part* Pg 139 (Page 122)

nimra21 Senior Member
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Posted: 23 September 2012 at 4:14am | IP Logged
Wow, that was so good! Khushi's breakdown, Arnav's support and consolation, both of them expressing their guilt and fear to each other. It was all written brilliantly! And finally 'my kiddo'. <3

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Posted: 23 September 2012 at 4:19am | IP Logged
Awesome update!!!
Loved their conversation!!
Continue soon!!Smile

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Posted: 23 September 2012 at 4:27am | IP Logged
I absolutely adored the update... It was just perfect... Khushi's anguish and helplessness beautifully portrayed by u through the falling of the haldi bowl... The way she thought abt her life as scattered and messed up as the haldi splattered all over the floor was very natural and my heart went out to her when she was feeling so miserable and blaming herself for everything ruined in their life... She is pregnant and going through all this add more stress to her already hormonal state.

Arnav as usual was such a sweetheart feeling guilty over no fault of his but acting like a true gentleman taking all the blame to provide respite to his pregnant,a little mental and massively hormonal wife is such a sweet and considerate thing to do... Last but not the least I just nearly died with "my kiddo" so finally Arnav Singh Raizada became a DAD... Now he won't let Khushi out of his sight after the Dr Jain visit in his absence and learning abt Khushi's pain, Khushi Singh Raizada will certainly have an extremely "what the" pregnancy.

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Posted: 23 September 2012 at 4:40am | IP Logged
this is the way the story should progress. lovely update

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Posted: 23 September 2012 at 4:53am | IP Logged
I love how he calls her Biwi and the child 'kiddo'! It's SO cute! :) Such a sweet update! She being her vulnerable self and he was the sweetest husband ever, cleaning her up and comforting her. Truly, she's a child woman. 

YEYEYEYEE I loved the ending! "You're getting one!" SO SO SO CUTE! :) Arnav and Khushi are adorable! :) 

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Posted: 23 September 2012 at 4:58am | IP Logged
Farah you amaze me...

how do you write such awesome updates daily

loved it

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Posted: 23 September 2012 at 5:04am | IP Logged
Khushi and her hormones make her all the lot more adorable. And how Arnav handles her is so cute. Wonderful updateSmile

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Fantastic

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