SS: Becoming A Father *UPD Last Part* Pg 139 - Page 96

That was just beautiful 🤗

awesomee updateee,...

OMG Farah this was sooo adorable and beautifully written <333 Arnav being all daddy sounds more hotter...😉..these were my favourite lines of awl update...😳...I love it when a baby grips ur finger tight...❤️...

she started watching her father's garden in the night time, turning her little head this way & that way, with her small button like brown eyes. Arnav inserted his index finger in one of her hands & she gripped it tightly. His eyes twinkled with pride

Ufff Jalebi is sucha cute nick for their doll...awww I cant believe Khushi calling her jalebi actually sounds super cute and adorableee...it gives the idea of her being chubby lil sweet dolll...
Faraahhh PLEASEEE do write an epilogueee...where jalebi is a tad bit older..may be walking...please pleaseee...

very nicely done.  looking forward to the next one

a beautiful conclusion to a beautiful yet highly realistic story... loved seeing arnav being a hands-on dad and how engrossed he's is in his daughter... also loved the moments of togetherness and contentment embodied in their last words to each other!

cute cute cute cute!!!!

A perfect ending...but i cannot stop my self from saying that i wish you would have considered continuing with the fanfic further.

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soft sweet wonderful!