SS: Becoming A Father *UPD Last Part* Pg 139 - Page 94

Farah am so sorry...how come i missed ur PMs ???? Edited by Jyo.Arshi.IPK - 11 years ago

well done

Loved it...

Would love to read more stuff from u...

Now that was such an adorable,awesome and Absolutely amazing ending to the most sweet and lovely story... I am so gonna miss this story and can't wait for u to start another one... Being a mother I always love stories with a loving Dad and baby involved and this story has everything... The way u have captured the emotions of a Dad-to-be Arnav was simply amazing... The time he took to get associated to the baby was completely natural and hats off to u for writing this beautiful story.

I laughed my head off when Arnav was trying to explain it to Khushi that he was just trying to make the doc and nurses accustomed to Khushi's craziness and the way he said that he has a thing for crazy chicks from Lucknow was just adorable.

A perfect ending to an amazing story..'ll miss it...i loved the update a lot...it was everything it needed to be...thanks for pm:-)

Beautiful ending
Loved it

wow beautiful ending dear...simply amazing...loved it very much n thnx 4da pm...

I can't describe how much zabardast this story is.Glad that you finished it and that too on a happy and satisfied note.I always looked forward to read this story everyday and now I would look forward to read the more work written by you.The amazing part of this story was that it was light,romantic and that it concentrated mostly on just Arhi without the janjal pora of dadi,anjali and sanekwa.It was a pleasant experience to read it,would look forward to read more of your work.

That was beautiful!!!

wow... Farah, this is 4 u dear 👏
nice update
all the best 4 ur future works..
and thanx 4 d PM 😊

vey nice end...
plzz soon start new story...
love ur stle...