SS: Becoming A Father *UPD Last Part* Pg 139 - Page 88

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Posted: 11 years ago
i have read last three parts in one go
love them all
nicely written
sorry for commenting late
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG...u ending this y??????😭
Loved the update...πŸ‘πŸΌ
Arnav has really come a long way..πŸ˜›
Awww...the room!!!!!was perfect...πŸ‘πŸΌ
A beautiful bday gift..πŸ‘
thnaks for the pmπŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
great update
liked it
arhi moments were beautiful
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Posted: 11 years ago
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!

REALLY AMAZING UPDATE...I AM SO SAD ITS COMING TO AN END!!!


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Posted: 11 years ago
awww...loved the update...loved arnav with ananya...i am dying to read his scenes with his own kiddo...the nursery was beautiful...a dream like..and those stars idea was exceptional...
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am sad that its gonna end tomorrow but really happy to be a part of this amazing journey... Thanx a lot for mentioning my name and u r always welcome sweetie... Shall we expect a sequel to this superb SS abt the first year of Arnav and Khushi as parents when they will learn the joys as well as the hardships of being parents bcz believe me it's the toughest job in the world but at the same time the most rewarding experience of ones life.

Arnav is such a sweetheart and when he finally will hold his kiddo in his lap then he will become a Dad first and a husband and brother later and I bet he and Khushi will have a hell of a time in the delivery suite and I can't wait to read abt that.
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Posted: 11 years ago
grt work.. loved it..πŸ‘ bt i m little sad tat u gonna end dis soon.. i ll wait for ur next ff.. hope u ll write more
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the update...this transformation of arnav was an amazing journey...with your lovely writing and immense talent of portraying characters and their emotions so well i would love to read your other and new work on arhi...am glad through this ss i got to know a great person who writer so beautifully...i ll miss this ss a lot:-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it farah.amazing part
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Posted: 11 years ago
The mighty ASR has come a long way, hasn't he?

You have portrayed the transformation from a loving husband to an adoring ,excited father beautifully. Eagerly waiting for the next update.

After this gets over, please consider writing a sequel too,
Arnav and Kushi as young parents!