SS: Becoming A Father *UPD Last Part* Pg 139 - Page 44

Posted: 11 years ago


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Posted: 11 years ago
Hell!! I res'd first😆

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Loved the update dear... it was awesome... me likes... the saree is very stunning...I'm sure if khushi wore it she'd look ravishing... shocking Arnav didn't take her right there right at that moment

btw I dont want the story to end I want it to go on and on😃
Edited by SamiyaIPKKND - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
amazing yaar...thanks for PM...continue and update nxt part soon... Edited by priyalovely - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
oh man i got second...
anyways awsuuum update dear...loved it very much n thnx 4da pm...
Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful update sweetheart !!!
simply loved it !!!!
i love the way khushi makes arnav realise his own qualities !!!
loved it !!!!!!! 😊
Posted: 11 years ago
great update dear
liked it.
Posted: 11 years ago
just read parts 10 and 11 together! love your writing style where every word and gesture is apt and not over the top! the maturity shown by the characters is amazing and I especially love the sensible yet heartfelt conversations between khushi and arnav... yet their passion and desire doesn't take a backseat but is ever-present to scorch the page!
Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the updates...mama ji was amazing and definitely a fab example...waiting to read more...thanks for pm:-)
Posted: 11 years ago
loved the update...
One night, she thought, one night I had hoped to look more striking than my husband, Devi Maiyya. But that was just too much to ask, wasn't it, when the name of your husband was Arnav Singh Raizada

hahahaha..this is my favourite line from this update...
waiting for the next update...pleaseee don't end the story anytime soon...its too good to be ended soo early..

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