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Posted: 02 September 2012 at 11:52am | IP Logged
Shree,chotu and arjun were all standing in front of operation theatre..pacing here nd there anxiously

When suddenly doctor came out

Rathod:doctor hows she now?
Doc:dekhiye mr.rathod unki condition bahut critical h..bahut khoon baha h..abhi hum kuch b nahi keh skte..abhi 24 ghante unhe maut se ladna hoga..
Sayin dis doctor went away..leavin worried nd tensed 3 behind

Shree-ab kya hoga..pllzz god help her...
Chotu-dont worry shree..use kuch ni hoga
Rathod-have faith guyz...she is a strong gal..use kuch ni hoga

Few distance away...arjun was standing alone..lost in his pool of thoughts

"""Plz god..riya ko kuch ni hona chaiye.. warna mai apne aap ko nahi maaf kr paunga""

Suddenly then rathod came nd put his hand on his shoulder
Rathod-arjun...
But before he cud say nythg..arjun turned back..hugged rathod tight nd started crying lyk a small child

""*sammer,riya ko kuch nahi hona chaiye...mai ek aur sadma nai bardash kr skta...roshni ke jane ke baad mai zinda rehte hue b berang si zindagi jee rha tha..par riya ne muje fer se jeena sikhaya..use ne muje ehsaas dilaya ki zindagi kabhi rukti nahi..agr bhagwan kuch leta h...to uske badle deta b h...maana ki roshni ki jagah koi ni le skta...ar usne muje roshni ke jaane ke baad riya di...ab bhagwan riya ko mujse nahi le skta...plz rathod...agr riya ko kuch ho gya..mai mar jaunga..meri wajah se hua h...sikandar ki dushmani merse hi thi hamesha...isi karan usne pehle roshni ko mara...aur ab...nahi aisa nahi ho skta*""

.rathod:arjun...riya ki kuch ni hoga..muje vishwaas h...jaise roshni mere behen thi..riya ko b maine choti behan maana h...vo ab dobara mujse meri behan aur tumse tumhari zindagi nahi chinega..""

24 hrs later

Suddenly team of doctors nd nurses started rushin towards d i.c.u wher riya was admitted..

Etf team tried to speak them but they didnt rply

Half hour later doctor came out

Shree-sir riya kaise h...kya hua...

Doctor-relax all..gud news h...riya ko hosh aa gya h..vo khatre se bahar h..par abhi bhi vo kamjoor h..to koi ek hi insaan andr jaye abhi unse milne...

Arjun-mai aaunga doctor
Doctor-thik h...

As arjun entered...he cud see riya lying on dat hospital bed...wid a bottle of blood providing her

Riya there caught a look of arjun

Riya-arjun sir. Aap thik h na...thank god. Muje bahut darr lag rha tha...agr aapko kuch ho jata to..sir. mai bahut khush hu aap thik h. Bhagwan ji thnk u so much aapne mere sir ko bacha liya
   
Arjun was caught by attention by listening word 'mere sir'
But riya as usual continued her talks
""Finaly sir..humne sikandar ko hara diya...dekha sir..maine aapse kaha tha na..ki aap jarur kamyaab honge aur bhagwan aapka saath jarur denge...roshni ji...dekha aapne...apke arjun ji nr kaise sikander ko saza di...aap kabhi unse juda hona ka
dukh mat mehsus kijiyega...kyunki dil se to aap dono hamesha jude h

She had tears in her eyes all while along

Arjun-riya

Riya-sir..plz muje bolne dijiye...jab se appse mai mili..apko.ankhon mei ek dard sa dekha...us dard se muje b farak padne laga..pata ni kyu..aapka past janne ke baad..mai kabhi chainn se nahi rhi..jo hua..nahi hona chaiye tha..aapke gusse appke attitude ke peche ka ye kaaran...aapko zinda rehte hue b jine nahi de rha tha sar...tabhi maine decide kia..ki mai aapko aise nahi jine dungi..aaapka ye dard mitake hi rahungi

Arjun wid his moist eyes-kitne log aaye meri lyf mei...tumhi ne muje smja...mera gussa sehan kiya.mera sath dia
Kyu riya kyu
Riya-pata nahi sir...she just lowred her gaze

Arjun just sat besides her bed nd stared movin her face closer to hers

Arjun-riya muje jawab do

Riya.-sir wo mai..
But before she cud say anythng he landed his lips on hers nd gave her a sweet peck..nd then parted away

Arjun-open ur eyes

She slowly opened her eyes

Arjun-ab shayad tumhe apne sawal ka jawaab dene mei mushkil nahi hogi

Riya's cheeks turned. red

Riya-sir...

Arjun-riya...bhagwan ne tumhe meri zindagi ke roop mei bheja h meri kismat mei...tumse milne ke baad hi maine dobara jena sikha...tum meri andheri zindagi mei ujaala bankr aayi aur meri zindagi roshan kr di...uth te sote ..har wakt tumhe hi sochta hu...

He stood uo..moved a little behind. Weng on his knees...took out a ring frm his pocket ..took it in his hand..nd said

""""Riya...will u marry me?""""

Edited by sweetdoc - 28 October 2012 at 11:30pm

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Posted: 02 September 2012 at 12:01pm | IP Logged
Awesome awesome awesome... jis din ye sach hoga main apni puri class ko treat dene wali hoon... Wink

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Posted: 02 September 2012 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
Amazin!!!!! these scenez were playing in my mind for a long time n u wrote it down so beautifully!!!
awesome!!!!Clap

Keep giving us more!!!!SmileSmile

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Posted: 02 September 2012 at 12:29pm | IP Logged
very romantic,specially the peck on her lips and arjun crying on rathore,afraid of losing her...
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Goldie

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Posted: 02 September 2012 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
Thanx alll...

Ok i know its an os...but shud i write its continuation...based on ariya's marriage...celebration tymm

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Posted: 02 September 2012 at 1:30pm | IP Logged
Agar aesa hua na to I will celebrate tht day full
Omg so cute
He kissed her hayeee

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Posted: 02 September 2012 at 1:35pm | IP Logged
awesome loved itt
loved each bits of it the way arjun showed in this was mindblowing

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Posted: 02 September 2012 at 3:24pm | IP Logged
Nice !! even if it won't happen so soon OuchOuch

But it was really nice !!

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