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Fiza28 IF-Rockerz

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8 months later

The time had flew so fast that no one even realized it 

  The entire ETF team was very supportive of riya they had taken very good care of her and the baby

Rathod was the one who would make sure everything was hygenicly clean  and make riya comfortable in the office she was still working but doing paper work only

Shree was the one who had set up a pager for all of them so at whatever time of day or night   if riya need anything it would buzz them and they would all rush over to riya

Chotu was the one who use get riya what she craved at whatever time it would be

While arjun was basically a unofficial husband he cared for her the most,he made sure she was comfortable during the whole pregnancy he did everything a husband would do for expecting wife.  All the doctor visits he use to accompany riya to make sure her and baby were fine .he was the one that made sure she would eat her food and meds on time .



 Rathod: guys I called you here to discuss a important baat  its 8 months of riya's pregnancy and well we have to be alert she can even have a early delivery and we should done  this last month because we have been so busy and well face It we all are men this slipped our minds . riya ki baby shower kar na hai uski ghod bharai 

Chotu: hum sir par yeh tho larkiyaan kar the hai na

Arjun: chotu rathod theek bol re hai hum sab ko hi kar na hai after all hum sab riya ki family hai

Shree: yes sir that we are and it will be loads of fun but karna kya hai?

Rathod: muhje khud nahi pata par we have find out

Arjun: rathod itna difficult nahi hai muhje pata hai kya kar the  roshni ki dost ki baby shower main hum gaye the

Rathod: tho Raute bolo kar na kya hai

Arjun: achi dress , jewelry set   ya kangaan etc  fruit, cocnut and a chunni and they we have also give gifts for the baby and then whisper something sweet about the baby in her ear

Shree: sir games bhi hote meri bhabi  bole thi muhje  jaise ek  jar   of ras gulas hai and jar of achar you keep in front what ever riya pics decides if ita  girl or boy and there are other games

  Rathod: good this should be a surprise for her

Chotu: sir baby gift  ki liye what should we get

Arjun : I know exactly what to get a wooden paalna(cradle) riya saw it and loved it but she backaway because of the price this can be from all of us

Rathod: good and job hi aur we need to get we can

Just then riya walks  to the off ice walking slowly she has a hand a on her tummy as she walks

Shree goes and helps her sit down

Shree: hai ri how are you and how is this little cutie huh talking to her belly

Riya: shree step away from my tummy dehko my mood is off  so please

Chotu: aww kya hua ri

Riya: I didn't get sleep at all last night

Arjun suddenly stands up and goes to her

Arjun: riya tum theek ho dard ho ra hai kya chotu jaldi call the doctor

Riya: arjun sir im fine sachi just this lil badmash kept on kicking me  all night bas and when i began to sing this little angel would stop

Shree: really what did you sing

Riya: a lullaby

Shree: hum bhi sunaao na

Riya: uff ok this little wants hear it too she is kicking me    and whn I sing she will stop

The guys all want fell the baby kick

Riya: ok ok you may

Riya starts to sing

Laa la mmm laa la oh oh oh la la mmm

So jaa so jaa meri pyaari si  gudiya soo jaa

chandani ke palne mein
meethe meethe sapne hain
 us sapno mein tu kho jaa
so jaa,  haan so jaaa meri pyaari si gudiya so jaa   pariyon ki jahan se

nindiya  aati hai aur pyaar si sapon ko lay atti hai  so jaa  soo jaa meri pyaari si gudiya  mama ki pyaari gudiya so jaa  rona nahi rona so jaa haa so jaa mama ki gudiya so jaa

laa la mmm laa lal oh ho oh la la mmm

 Riya: dehka she stopped kicking na smiles riya

Chotu: ri yeh lori kahan si  aaye

Riya: I wrote it

3 days after


At riya  house

Riya: shree itna shopping kyun kar na tha aaj im so tired lets go in and rest please

She opnes the door and her house is fully decorated with toys and  flowers and lights

ETF Team: Surprise

Riya: wow omg yeh sab

Rathod: your baby shower riya

Riya: thanks guys

Arjun : riya one more surprise

He shows her the palna

Riya: omg this the one I wanted for her

Arjun: yup

Chotu: ri you always say her how do you know it will be a girl?

Riya: I don't know chotu I just do and I hope I want a daughter like me not a boy who will be like jaane do yeh sab lets enjoy

They sit riya down and give her the basket of fruit and cocnut and whisper in her ears and they play games riya is laughing and smiling

Rathod: raute riya is laughing and happy after such along time hai na

Arjun: haan Rathod aur kis ki nazar na lag (arjun goes up to her takes  kajal from her eye lid and puts a tikka on her neck )

Riya look at arjun eye lock

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Mimi2609 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 2:42am | IP Logged
unofficial husband ko ab official husband bana do nahLOL
Love it, please continue

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kaveriw2008 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 2:45am | IP Logged
wow this is so amazing...
every scene is shown so cute love it...

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fffan123 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 3:13am | IP Logged
Loved the parts. Waiting to read more.

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 3:16am | IP Logged

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elle.. Goldie

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 3:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by haruhi26

unofficial husband ko ab official husband bana do nahLOL
Love it, please continue

sachi...official husband bann jana chaiye ab to

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elle.. Goldie

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 3:36am | IP Logged
Loved both d partss...awsssummm...

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UmIbrahim IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 3:37am | IP Logged
That was cute updates Di!
Loved both

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