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Ariya vaada raha FF ch 20 LAST CH PG 50 3/4 (Page 6)

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 9:20am | IP Logged
Plzzz..continue ASAP...

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 10:20pm | IP Logged
Great...
Continue soon!

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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 12:57am | IP Logged
Wow
This is really good so far
Oh no poor Riya
I cannot believe such a thing could happen to her
I hope they stop her in the nick of time and find a reasonable solution

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 1:46am | IP Logged
PLS MS. FIZA COMPLETE THE POST

I M WAITING YOUR POST.

PLS PPPLLLSSS

VERY INTERESTING

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 3:26am | IP Logged
Very emotional.. I so love this ff and awesome ETF team.. Everyone cares for her very much.. Hope everything vl b alright soon for Ria and she gets all happiness nd love in her life.. Looking forward to the next part:-)

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 11:14am | IP Logged
Hey.. Sorry I had missed your PM since I cleared my PM inbox 2 days ago.. 

Well, both the chapters were brilliant! So, she's a victim indeed.. Gosh! That was cruel.. I loved the way, she had composed herself, with the ETF team taking extra care of her..

Pregnant??? Ouch OMG!! Now that's something.. I wonder how she's going to deal with it.. 

Well, the precap for Chap 4 also sounds damn interesting.. I hope Arjun reaches there on time and stops her frm taking the dangerous step.. 

Please update soon.. Really curious to knw what happens next.. 

Thanks for the PM's.. Smile

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 2:09am | IP Logged

 

 Ch4

Rathod pushes raute out of the way

And runs toward riya along with shree and chotu

Rathod puts a hand on her shoulder she just cries on his shoulder

Arjun walks toward her (rathod stops him by putting a hand indicating him not to move)

Rathod: shree riya ki pass raho

 Rathod stands up grabs raute by arm and takes him in a room

Rathod: Raute yeh kya thareka hai why did you make riya touch her stomach

He turns him around and points dehko usko ….just look at her state koi fikar bhi hai ya nahi? tum kaise raute how could you act that way

 

 Arjun:  bas rathod  im just as worried as all of you  main bhi parishaan hoon .

Seeing he  like this is killing me rathod pata hai

Rathod: Really Raute jaise tumhare behavior hai  muhje nahi lag tha

Arjun:  damn it Rathod Fikar hai kyun ki I

Just then  they hear

Sheer: ri  please bas calm down  drink a little  water

Chotu: haan ri your crying so much that you have hiccups  

Rathod goes to give her water

Riya: nahi  please I want it she gets upset at them forcing her to drink it that (she pushes the glass away and it breaks )

Main kaha na nahi chaiye  yells riya

 Arjun : bas riya we all understand what you are feeling  right now but this not the way to act samhje ya samjao ?

Rathod: Raute bas ek shabd bhi  nahi

Riya is fuming looks up at him with tears in her eyes

Riya: Nahi aaj main aap ko samjati  aur aap samjogay…

Shree chotu and Rathod are shocked

Shree: yaar wounded tigress pala para hai

Chotu: haan yaar arjun sir tho gaye

Rathod: tum dono theek bol re ho Raute  ka acha class hoga

 Riya: ACP ARJUN SURIYAKANT RAUTE I have every right  to act this way and no you don't know what im going through I don't even think you understand. After that horrible night I tried to get my life back to normal just when I did. this happened this is the reality of that night … yeh bacha  it will always make me  remember what happened I now can't forget it even if I wanted to do you have any idea how that feels no because you're a man not a woman . so yes I do have every right to  cry ,scream,  and act this way Samhje ya phir se  samjao 

With that she leaves the office

Shree: ri where you going ?

Riya: ghar shree im tired 

 

Few days later

Riya: sir I'd like to take 2days  off I need some space

Rathore: riya you can take as many days as needed

Riya: thank you sir 

Chotu: we will miss you ri

Shree: haan ri take care kuch bhi chaiye just call us

Riya: thanks guys

she leaves

 

Arjun: shree uska cell tap karo  who kis se baat kart hi kahan jaate I want everything

Shree: kya par kyun sir

Arjun: do what im telling you no questions samhje ya samjao?

Rathore: yeh kya hai Raute riya koi criminal nahi hai

 

An Hour later

Shree: sir riya ka cell… kis se baat kar re hai

Arjun: put it on speaker shree

Riya: haan doctor I'll be there in half hour thank you

Rathod: doctor? Riya had a check today kis ko bole bhi nahi

Doctor: Riya this is very risky yeh abortion can be life-threatening your body is already very weak and mentally you're very stressed  as your doctor im advising you not to do this

ETF Team looks at each other : Abortion

Arjun is very upset

Shree:arjun sir you were right aap ko kaise

Arjun: shhh

Riya: doctor yeh body meri hai yeh baby bhi mera hai whatever I want to do I will do main yeh abortion kar re hoon that is final  she cuts the call

Arjun bangs his fist on the table  "yeh larki pagal hoge hai  kya … abortion ….  he runs out of the office

Rathod: Raute ..Raute rako Raute damn

Shree: ri kaise yeh kar sak thi hai

Rathod: chotu get the car Raute gusse main hai aur riya hush main nahi hai jaldi karo we have stop them both

 

Arjun calls chotu: chotu hospital call kar ke bole not to do the operation till I come kuch bhi kar ki rako unko abhi

Chotu: ji sir

Arjun arrives at the hospital

Arjun: patient Riya Mukerjee

Nurse: room 342 operation ki prep kare hai

Arjun runs in the room

Arjun: yeh abortion nahi hoga

Riya: aap yahaan kya kare ho ? wait you Tapped my cell

Arjun: haan and its good varna tum yeh pagal hoge ho kya

Riya stands up

ETF Team runs in the room

Riya:  dehko sir this is my personal life koi case nahi hai ki aap sab solve kar re hai. Whatever  I do  doesn't concern you all …

Arjun: yes it does damn it and tum yeh nahi kare ho samhje ya samjao

Nurse: dehko this a hospital please be quite or I will call the police

Arjun:ETF main police hoon don't get involved in this samhje ya samjao?

Nurse backs away

Riya: sir for your kind information im going ahead with this

Doctor comes in

Doctor : riya are you ready  ? you sure about this

Riya: ji doctor I've decided this what I have to do

Arjun :nahi doctor koi operation nahi hoga

Riya: hoga

Rathod: doctor  please gives us a few minutes to talk this over

Doctor: theek hai but riya please don't stress

Riya: Rathod sir aap bhi please try understand me

Rathod: riya we do both you and arjun are right in your own way but this time main Raute ki saath hoon yeh galat hai

Riya: sir aap

Shree: ri this too dangerous  please just don't do it

Arjun" tho final hai Rathod bhi bol diya hai tum yeh nahi kar sak the ho final ghar chalo (he grabs her hand)

Riya pulls it away

Riya: enough this not a case that I need rathod sir permission im off duty and over 18 im old enough do what I feel . this my body , my baby . you guys won't have go through what I will . this nota easy descion I took but this the right one . I will be one that will hear  the taunts , the rubbish people will talk about me . I will have to answer  when people ask me who is the baby's father what will I say how will say that I was ..( she bites her lip) I will have go through the 9 months of pain and suffering  …ill have go through the labor pains …then raising the baby again the taunts and question I was asked  my child will be asked what will I say how ill I answer. What the world will call my baby what name they will give I know  and raing a child alone being a single mother won't be easy and most of all  the baby will have their father gunda khoon . after much thought I decided this and im not backing away im doing this

Arjun: Riya nothing like this will happen just aisa mat karo

Riya: no

shree: ri this not the solution we all are here with you 

Rathod: haan riya no will say a word we will handle them

Chotu: and  ri you won't be alone we all will  help take care of the baby

Arjun: jaane do chotu we are hitting are head on a wall  let her kill her baby … I never once thought a EFT officer can also be a killer disgusting and ek baat aur riya sirf baap ka khoon nahi hoga tumhare khoon bhi hai us main .

Riya looks up at him shocked at his words

Doctor comes in

Riya: doctor im ready

Doctor puts her on the bed and the reel her to the OT

They  all wait out side

Chotu: can't believe she is doing it

Suddenly after ten min the doctor comes out

Rathod: kya hua doctor koi problem hai kya itne jaldi  you came out

Doctor: Riya decide at the last moment not go ahead with it she said she can't kill her baby it has her khoon .ive done her check up the baby is fine just make sure she takes these medinces and vitamins , and try to avoid any caffeine and what ever she craves to eat give her and make sure she isn't stressed and she should lift any thing heavy

 Rathod: ji doctor thank you Raute dehko don't stress her please

Arjun: theek hai

Riya comes out  they get in the car Arjun riya , chotu shree in one carrathod left to go to a crime scene

In the car

 There was a silence between them

Yet so much was being said

Riya ons the radio

The song chickni chameli is on

 Riya starts shaking her head 

I love this song

Shree: haan it is a great song Katrina kya dance kare thi iss mein

Chotu: dasu lag re thi  yaar

Arjun : cheap song hai yeh he offs it

Riya on it again I want hear it

Arjun offs it

Riya makes a sad face

Riya: chotu muhje nahi baby ko suna hai yeh song

Arjun shakes his head and  quietly on's the radio again

Chotu and shree: just smile

Shree: waise ri baby ki taste in music is super top kyun chotu

Riya: yup just like her mom smiles riya

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 2:18am | IP Logged
awesome dear...
One can feel the pain and insecurity Riya's going through...
Please update soonSmile

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