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CH 19

Preparations for Asr and Riya's official engagement has started in full swing. Rathore's house was less as a house and more of a function room. With Rathore instructing everyone

Rathore to Decorator 1: Bhai zara jaldi jaldi haath chalao Engagement aaj hi h…

 

Shree: Sir, ye orchids kaha rakhu

Rathore: Shree pagal jaise questions mat karo vaha vase mai rakho .. No wait, give it to Shru she'll arrange that.

Shree: Shru…

Shru: kya hai Shree…

Shree shyly voh mai na ye flowers laya tha please saja dogi?

Shru: grrr tum hi kar lo na Shree, mai yaha catering sambhal rahi hu na…

Chotu: Shree tu shru ko tang kyu kar rha hai…

Shree: Rathore sir ke chamche chup kar…

 

Rathore yells from the other end… Shru time waste mat karo dear please jaldi voh arrange karo. 
Shru: Theek hai bhai..

Shree: Bhai ki chamchi…

 

Shru: Ohhooo Mahi ye Fiza di ko dekha kya.. Ufff…

 

Mahi: nahi yaar mai toh basss Gorky sir ko dekha hai.

Shru: ufff ye pagal kara degi mujhe..

Shru calls out Fizaaa diii, ufffooo kaha gayi ye didi kya bulane start kiya bhav khane hi lag gayi hai ufff…

Fiz : kya hua Shru chila kyu rahi ho? Naraz ho kya?

Mahi bursts out laughing lo shuru hogayi madamTongue

Shru: Di dekho agar aap aise hi bolte gayi na then apki aur Sam bhaiya ke engagement mai badi musibaat banke khadi rakhungi mai keh deti hu haan…

Fiz: aarey maaf karde mujhe ufff….

Mahi: oye twin, tune usse pucha hi nhi jo puchne k liye itna gala faad rahi thi tu..

Shru: ohh thanks sistahHug sorry STML you know actually fiz di Riya ka outfit apne stitch karva diya kya darzi se? Is it perfect.

Fiz: Haan meri Anarkali, voh sab hogaya hai tu bata aur kuch kaam hai..?

Shru: di voh pagal Shree ke bache ne orchids laye hai aap please decorate kar do… mai Riya ko aaj ke liye mehandi dal ke ati hu… u knw chota valaWink

 

Fiz: haan theek hai.. Lekin orchids hai kaha?

Shru: Bhai ke pass rakh diya vaps… sorry!!!Tongue Shru sticks her tongue out teasing Fiza.

Mahi again bursts out laughing while eating her candies.

Shru: Tu kya khi khi kar rahi hai? Please check the food… please strictly sirf taste karna… and TOFU tu bilkul taste mat karna.. I'll do that.. Baki sab 1 hi spoon taste karna..

Mahi: oye jana mujhe sikhayegi tu

Shru: Yes, behan dekh tu agar mere hisaab se nhi gayi toh mom ko call karungiTongue

Mahi: Jana, mom ki bacchiii huhTongue tu mom ko call kar I'll call dad hahahahaROFL

 

Fiz: Ufff chup karo dono aur jao…

 

Riya: Omg Shru tu aagayi mai kitni nervous hu tujhe pata hai?

Shru: I knw yaar.. Sun lets go over your guest list and fir mai Mahi se confirm karti hu?

Riya: uff haannn yaar…

Koi mujhe bhi yaad karlo...a voice comes from the other side of room. A girl holding su…

Mushiii omg tu su ki full time nurse ban gayi hai...awww…said Shru

Mushi: Shru tu rehne de.. Voh Mahii kaha hai she should be taking care of Su not me akhir nurse vahi hTongue

Riya: haan yaar ye Mahi kaha hai havent seen her Unhappy

Mushi: Zarur Gorky ji ko dekhti ruki hongi…

Riya: hahaha kya mushi kuch bhi mat bol..

Mushi: aarey tujhe nahi pata kya???

Riya: Nahin yaar… mai subhe se niche kaha ayi hu..

Mushi: ufff voh jo is pure event ke incharge hai unka naam Gorky hai.. Apparently he used to study with us in our college.. Senior the voh..

 

Fiz: Haan… Riya tumhe GM yaad nahi kya??

Riya: omg GM its him??

Shru: haan… naah naah baacheee rote nahi..she says it to su whom she's holding right now

Riya: Haayeee kya love story hai…

 

Shru: ye baki sab ladkiya kaha hai haad hai lateness ki…

Fiz: kon baki sab dear..

Mushi: aarey voh sab jo hume help karne vale the…

Shru: haan Khushi, Madhu, jeevi, Maanvi and zoya…

Mushi: aarey I'm toh waiting for Viren..

Fiz: waiting for Viren ya Afzal…

Mushi blushes what kon afzal she says smirking.

 

Riya: mujhe is story ke baremai bhi nhi pata ufff…

Mahi walks in licking her candy, aarey Mushi aapke voh aagaye hai…

Zoya: Allah miyah whats wrong with these girls..

Jeevika: Aap log abhi ladkon ke baremai baat kar rahi hai..

Maanvi: kya baate ho rahi hai mujhe bhi batao…

Madhubala & Khushi..: ufff bachpan kab chodogi tum log..

 

All the nine girls hug each other finally parting it for a big group hug….

Missed you alll….

 

Fiz: Viren jiju kaise h…Wink to Jeevi

Maanvi: Jiju ek daam mast hai…

Madhu: Shru, Mahi, Mushi & Fiz..tum charo ki baat aage badhi kya??

Shru: sab ki baadgayi lekin mere liye koi nhi mila… :(

Khushi: meri jaan, don't worry I'm with you.Wink

Mushi, Riya: Shru tu rehne de…

Mahi: haha… pagal samne vale ko pehchaan bechara tere se kitna darta hai voh… hayeeeEmbarrassed

Shru: kon??? Shree?? 'Unbelievable'

Khushi: What The?

 

Oye girls, I mean Jeevi and Maanvi tum logo ko toh pata hi hai Vadhera family is coming please unke liye sab intazaam hogaya hai kya nahi ye check karo specially Jeevi u should please go and check mere bhai ke hisaab se sab kuch hua hai ya nahi… Btw Viru kaha hai..

 

Viren: tumne bulaya aur hum chale aaye..

All the girls except Riya, Jeevi and Maanvi… Hayeee Jijaji… kya baat hai aaj aap bade dashing lag rahe ho

Viren: ohhooo meri itni saari saliya hai toh mai dashing kaise na lagu..

Maanvi: huh jiju kitna fek marte ho aap..!!!


Viru girls please go out mujhe kuch private baat karni h Ri se!

Ri: bhai kya hua

Viru: Ri I'm really happy for you...and Arnav

Ri: hayee thanks bhai  she hugs him

Viru: Don't worry even though khene ke liye I'm from ASR's side dil se I'm from your side..Wink and take it easy everything will go smoothly.

Ri: Vadhera family aagaya h kya?

Viru: nahi.. vaise don't worry even if I'm with ASR for now MY family is your family right! Toh they are from your sideWink aur jeevi toh hai hi.

Ri: Haan Jeevi hai toh, omg I'm mad at u for not inviting me for your wedding.

Viru: I'm sorry dear. I seriously didn't know where u were! College ke baad sab aise bichde ki pucho hi maat!!

 

Ri: ohooo its okay Viru don't be senti.. vaise tumhare ladke vale aagaye I mean voh idiotic devar's/jijus mere aagaye kya?

Viru: Aate hi hoge voh!!

 

As soon as their conversation ended, some light music started playing in the background. Seven girls out of nine barged into Riya's room dragged her and took her outside. Fiza whispered into Riya's ears 'Thoda sharma le ladki sab aye h aur sagai bas shuru hi ho rahi h'

Shru: Welcome Ladies and… forget it… Bhaiyo, behnoo aur sakhao… Welcome to the engagement uffooo 'tu hi bol she whispered' while the crowd smiled/laughed at shru's antics

Mahi: Jaise isne kaha Bhaiyo, behnoo aur sakhao… svagat hai aap sabka Hone vale jija ji I mean 'Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada' aur humari pyaari chulbuli 'Riya' ki sagai mai…

Shru: Lets begin Shall we? Opps mera matlab hai kyu na hum karyakram shuru kare dosto…Wink

Spot lights fall on Riya, and then on ASR who's already seated. Riya walks down the stairs and was seated next to Riya with shy smile playing on her lips that widened by every passing second.

'MUSIC' echoed Shru & Mahi's voice simultaneously.

sath baras kee umar hai phir bhee lagta ek shehjada –

kee naubat dhol baje jab nache kudee da dada

kee naubat dhol baje, hey balle balle balle oy

 

jhum raahe hain dharatee ambar jhum rahee duneeya -

kee naubat dhol baje jab nache kudee dee ma

kee naubat dhol baje, ja naa chachi nach naa

 

sar aangan ve kone kone gunj uthee shehnai -

kee naubat dhol baje jab nache kudee da bhai

kee naubat dhol baje

 

oye balle balle balle oye oye...

oye shekhar yar naa chugle yar

nach naa nach naa nach naa...

 

arre arre chhodo yar mai nahee nachhuga vachhuga

oye putar nach naa behen dee sagai che

ta pai nu nachna hee painda hai ha ha...

han toh phir bade bhaiya ko nachao naa

kyon teree bhee toh behen hai

oye ay gal changi boli ha ha...

 

oh come on shekhar nacho naa

nahee nahee mujhe nahee nachna

 

aaj hai sagai sun ladakee ke bhai

jara nach ke hamko dikha

aaj hai sagai sun ladakee ke bhai

jara nach ke hamko dikha

kudee kee tarah naa sharma

hay too meree gal mann ja, too meree gal mann ja

oye...

Shru, Mahi, Khushi, Madhu all the girls danced on this particular verse

'Aiming at Rathore, then at Viren.'

 

(sabko nachau, nach nachke dikhau

aa mujhko gale se laga)

munde se jara aankh lada

oye too meree gal mann ja

hay too meree gal mann ja, oye soniye

Here Shru gave cold glance to Shree, while Mahi stole glances off Gorky, Rk made faces looking at Madhu while she stuck her tongue out teasing him. Arnav coldly yet confusedly started back at Khushi (who's eyes had welled up by his reaction)

 

sar pe sajake sehra barat leke aau

dulhan tujhe banake dolee me leke jau

o shava o shava, o shava o shava

bholee samajhke mujhpe naa dal aise dane

shadee nahee karungee ja mann ja divane

o shava o shava, o shava o shava

sun albelee meree tanha akelee, abb kattee nahee ratiya

ja re harjai chal chhod kalai, sab dekhti hain sakhiya

too meree gal mann ja

oye too meree gal mann ja

hay too meree gal mann ja, oye mann ja

Shree joined in while Shru pushed him off the dancing space. He barged back in elbowing her litely while leaving her irritated at the same time.

 

Mahi walked in between them to control the situation, but Khushi was no less she pulled Gorky in leaving squashed in between Shru and Shree unknowingly.

hey... hey...

 

kehatee hain meree sakhiya, dil me hai chor tere

kyon hath dhoke aise, pichhe padha hai mere

o shava o shava, o shava o shava

sakhiyo se apni keh do, kee bich me naa aaye

ban jaye meree salee, jeeja mujhe banaye

o shava o shava, o shava o shava

mai naa aaoon tere sang tere achchhe nahee dhang

naa aise bat badha

mujhe kar naa too tang abb band kar jung

aa banke dulhan ghar aa

too meree gal mann ja

han too meree gal mann ja, ha too meree gal mann ja

 

All of them danced enjoying the song… but somewhere in between the dances there was a couple missing that was none other than Fiza and Rathore. They were no where to be seen.

 

Shru, Mahi okay okay this is over get out everyone they did a short drama.

Shru: Mahi tune di ko dekha hai?

Mahi: Nahi yaar kahi voh bhaag toh nahi gayi?

Shru: kiske saath??

Mahi: Wahi jo humare soon hone vale jiju hai voh..?

Shru: yaar agar hone vale jiju hai toh bhagege kyu pagal

Mahi-Shru argued on stage. 

Madhu ran in between them excusing them and pushing them off the stage aarey niklo tum dono yaha se…

 

Then came Fiza's voice.. : voh ek thi meri pari si behan.

Rathore: nahi meri pari si behan.

Fiza: Rathore dekho fight mat karo

Rathore: Fiza ji aap mat karo na

*The crowd starts laughing*

 

Fine… band karo ye sab natak Rathore yelled.


Rathore walked off from stage into the crowd leaving everyone shocked…


Fiza looked on to him, but he didn't turn back… she called all the girls

 

Chunnari Chunnari...
Lalganj Ke Lalbad Se Lal Chunariya Layi
Chunnari Chunnari...
Lal Rang Mein Daal Daal Ke Lal Lal Rangvayi
Chunnari Chunnari...
Aaja Na Chhule Meri Chunnari Sanam
Kuchh Na Maein Bolun Tujhe Meri Qasam
Aayi Jawaani Sar Pe Mere
Tere Pe Kya Karun Jawaani Pe Reham, Haye
Chunnari Chunnari...

Fiza danced with the music, just expressing each and every word starting from the first line she had a Chunnari 'Dupatta' covering her forehead…

She continued dancing aiming at Rathore. Who had a stern unexpressable cold smile stamped on his face. But she continued.

Meri Chunnari Lal Rang Ki Sharmaye Ghabraye
Tu Jo Daale Is Pe Nazar Yeh Aur Lal Ho Jaye
Chunnari Chunnari...
Teri Chunnari Lipat Lipat Ke Paagal Mujhe Banaye
Pehle Se Hi Tadap Raha Tha Aur Mujhe Tadpaye
Jaane Tamanna Kar Na Aise Sitam
Kuchh Na Maein Bolun Tujhe Meri Qasam
Aayi Jawaani Sar Pe Mere
Tere Pe Kya Karun Jawaani Pe Reham, Haye
Chunnari Chunnari...

She saw his stern smile, she inwardly smiled at him while she winked at him secretly. She ran in front of him and whispered khadooss..with that she fell on the ground dancing with her Chunnari landing on her hand.


Chikne Chikne Badan Se Tere Sar Sar Chunnari Sarke
Aisa Lage Ke Bin Badal Ambar Pe Bijli Kadke
Chunnari Chunnari...
Ji Karta Hai Yeh Bijli Maein Tujhpe Aaj Giraaoon
Tujhko Bhar Loon Bahon Mein Yeh Chunnari Tujhe Udhaoon
Badhta Hi Jaye Dard Ho Na Yeh Kam
Kuchh Na Maein Bolun Tujhe Meri Qasam
Aayi Jawaani Sar Pe Mere
Tere Pe Kya Karun Jawaani Pe Reham, Haye
Chunnari Chunnari...

Rathore mumbled the lines and lifted her up into standing position and slided the dupatta off her head slowly smiling at her. Nautanki he whispered back.. Finally they danced as if no one was watching them. The girls who danced with Fiza left the stage just for the two would-be couples to enjoy the night… The song ended with Fiza throwing the Chunnari in the air as she twirled around Rathore. Finally stopping in front of him staring at him eye-to-eye, they both stared at each other and the Chunnari finally fell on them. 

*The clapps of the audiences were unheard by the couple who were yet to get engaged.
*

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great dear !

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nice update!! poora ka poora starplus cum india forum gaya hai riya ki engagement par.. sirf arjun nahi hai!!! update soon!!! waitingDay Dreaming

btw loved shree-shru n sameer-fiza romance

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riya ka engagment
par arjun nahi hai
continue soon


Edited by shrutisweety - 27 December 2012 at 9:33am

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Nyc update di...
where is arjun ?????

Edited by Payal_156 - 23 December 2012 at 3:54am

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Nice update.

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