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awesome update

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absolutely brilliant

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Wow u r great

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Awesome update ...
Loved it ...
Waiting for next ...
Update soon ...

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Ch18 WRITTEN BY FIZA 28

He was still spinning her around she was smilimg

Arre ab bas bhi karo ASR  at least put the ring on her said viren

He was was about to when she stopped him

 

 What happened you don't like the ring? Asked ASR

 

No its perfect 'I love it really but dehko ASR shaadi is in our Indian culture is'nt

just between the girl and the guy its joins 2 familes as well . jab thak nani and di ko pata nahi chalta nad until they agree I wont wear this ring she said

I want their blessing along with bhai's ( looking at rathore she smiles)

Ri they love you ' you know that nani tho college main use say tum hi RAIZADA KI GHAR KI BAHU HOGE and di and you were like sisters she is the one who taught you to cook na, and mami she use always love doing make up with you right  they adore you 'they will say yes right away says ASR

 

ASR then and now things have changed drastically 5 years ago I was single now ima single mom '. So much has happened  in my life '

Rana jo kya mere saath woh, then I dont even know what exactly happened between me and arjun  'what my realtion was with him but job hi hai ' whatever happened in goa that night su is the result ' my pregnancy 'my accident , coma, memory loss' and now su  custody case '

 

It not like before me always at your please then going back to hostel and college life  they liked the old riya  I don't know if they will like the new Riya she said

And please tell them everything don't hide a thing kyunki I don't want to start myy new chapter with lies only if they agree I'll more then happily wear this beautiful ROCK  she said smiling and haan you bever asked my bhaiya if you have my hand in marriage MR.ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA she said smiling

 

Ok fine   done its what 3pm now na 7PM im come here with di and nani , mami

    And that to shagun ki saath ' and main mere riya ki haath ill ask in the proper way  ristha paaka kar ke jaaonga  tum just be ready  ill handel everything he said and kissed her forehead  and was about to leave when he saw arjun

 

What are you doing here? Just leave  why have you come to insult her more says asr

I came to say sorry for whatever happened in the courtroom says arjun

 Why arjun yeh tho chathe  na you want su at any cost you , said your self hell of high water whatever I have to do I will to get my daughther said Riya

That was in my anger but I never wanted that to happen he says

Fine what ever im really happy right now please don't ruin my mood .. itna kaam hai before 7pm  just please leave im extremely busy  she says

Fine but muhje su do your busy with the larke wale coming na so ill handel my daughther  he says

Don't you dare she says , not another step su abhi meri hai she says

That's  until the court decides riya now you know what all that was said in court was a lie but this shaadi you want to do na will prove everything right he says

 

You are greatly mistaken acp Rawte says Viren in fact this will only help the case and I will make  sure su is with riya  he says

Arjun leaves

Chalo viren lots of work says asr

Nope you go im here with my sister he says

 Ok fine abhi tum larki wale ho but later tum larke wale hoge  says asr and Asr leaves

 

   God so much to do I have to cook but what and the house     it's a mess omg and what should I wear says riya

Riya clamdown we are all here to help says rathore

 

Yeah ri just tell us  syas shree

 Ok ill handel the cooking,  shree  please go get some fresh flowers 

Roses  di ko roses pasand and haan  bhai aap please handel the cleaning up 

Basanti stop says viren I called tarun my naukar  he will handel the cleaning  im make sure the house is perfect

 

Rathore lets handel decorations I know asr he will want get eneged today if nani agrees  ill call the phool wale  you go to the halwai says viren

 

Ok says rathore

 

 And chotu please handel su says riya

 

Later that eveing its 6pm

 Riya is still in the kitchen

 Angel go and get raedy tarun will deal with the rest go

Uff what do I wear go thinks riya

Here you go love says viren

 

I got this for you wear this he says along with this necklace

 

But viru I

Shhh chup now go she gets ready and gets su ready as well

She goes  down stairs to make sure everything is ready

Aye haye ri not bad teases viren

Thanks   im so nervous

Riya relax sab theek hoga

The door rings

 

Asr,nani,mami, di , nk come in

 

Ri greets them and touches there feet

While rathore invites them to sit down

 

They do ri brings chai n snacks

Then they all talk

 

Yeh kaise kahana hai?  I taught u this na riya ? then kya hau says anjali

Haan aur yeh kaise dress pene ho tum hello hi byee byee says mami

 

And yeh hai aap ki beti huh says nani and looks away

Ri is in tears

Nani yeh sab kya hai yells asr

Humare baat tho suno chote says di

Arre ri yeh tho itna tastey hai she says and smiles

Hello hi bye bye yeh tho aap ki dress itna bootyful hai says mami

Aur yeh choti si gudiya kitni pyaari hai riya betiya

Chote ne baatiya sab kuch aur humko koi problem nahi hai says nani

Ji haan itne ache larki ho tum riya tab bhi thi aur abhi  bhi  ho

Kya kuch nahi hua aap ki saath says di

 

Arre yeh sab choro anjali betiya hum ne shugaun leke aye hai hello hi bye bye hp ,jp aao they bring the trays

 It has so many box's of jewelry and clothes and sweets

 Yeh lo riya betiya says nani and hands her tray

And  riya haath do di puts these kangan on her new deisgn ki hai ache hai na says di

 

Nazar na lage huamre hone wale bahu ko hello hi bye bye says mami and takes money and does nazar and gives it to hp

 

Acha suno yeh guydiya hum ko tho do says di she holds su

 Riya betiya hum ne date fix ki kal enagement, phir uski do din baad, haldi , phir uski baad , mehndi  din mein raat ko sangeet, and ek din ka gap phir shaadi  tho

 

Kya  itne jaldi says rathore

Haan beta shub kaam main daar nahi kar the  fikar nahi karo humsab hai ho jaga

 

Says nani

  

Rathore I want ask you if you would give me the honure  of  giving your lovely sister's riya hand in marriage to me , I promise usko aur su jo aaj se main ne apni beti maana hai dono ko zindagi bhar khushi doonga says asr

 

Yes you may riya aur su ko dono are very lucky he hugs him

 

Arrey muhje  se bhi pooch mere bhen hai yeh says viren

Arre bhen huh? Saala  bhi kaisa bana yaad hai

Oye saala theek hai jaa haak hai tera jokes viren

Arjun walks in ' he heard everything

Jo khushi de ni hai riya ko do mere beti hai su ..tere nahi samhje ya samjao says arjun

 

They all look at him     




Edited by Fiza28 - 02 December 2012 at 5:03am

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*Edited

 
finally editing this...
 
Love the chap di as usual because you wrote it...<3
hayeeeEmbarrassed Riya's happy? is she happy?
 
Well seriously ye Arjun ka kya problem h? does he just wants Su???
 
Viren is really nice...
 
Loving Rathore  & Riya...
Overall awesome chaptr di.. bt mere liye short thaROFL
 
 


Edited by funkylicious - 02 December 2012 at 10:29pm

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Posted: 02 December 2012 at 5:17am | IP Logged
engagement bhi ho gaya!!!

whatz with this arjun.. sirf apni beti ki padi hai!!! doesnt he want riya??Angry
n riya dont know what happen in goa?? Ouch noone knows... even ariya Shocked
update soon!!! Clap



Edited by Queen.Bee - 02 December 2012 at 6:18am

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i dont want to see arjun like that.

everyone knows that even in messed up mind arjun will do no such things.

i wnt more ariya scenes

i like arnav but i dont want him to interfere with ariya

sorry if anything wrong


anyway writing is nice

update soon

i feel sorry for arjun...Cry


Edited by srividhya68 - 02 December 2012 at 5:25am

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