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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 10:32am | IP Logged
Hey.. When are you going to update this one, dear? I re-read the story!! You left it at such a cliffhanger.. And the precap sounds interesting as well.. 

Waiting to read more.. I just hope Arjun helps her to deal with her trauma! Smile

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Oh wow, gut wrenching and painful but interesting to see how Arjun helps her overcome this trauma and how Riya deals with it.

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fizz.. jaan tumhari ff yahan bhi... pm bhi nahi kiya... achcha nibhaya aapne ye dosti... dost dost na raha... 

hehehe.. ok anyways.. loved it.. please continue soon..

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That was really nice! plz continue.

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Ch 2

 

Suddenly Riya faints in his arms arjun places on the bed 

Arjun: rathod we have call the doctor now

 Doctor comes in all the men are outside the door

 

Shree: jo Riya kay saath hua is just horrible

 

Rathod:  I know us rana ko nahi chorenge hum he will pay

 

Chotu : muhje tho riya ki fikar ho re hai

 

Arjun:  dehko jo hua hau laken ab we have  to make her stronger she has face her fears ..we all know ki after such an incident how a girl feels and what happens   'aur rana ko main handle karonga

 Suddenly the doctor comes out 

 Dr. how is she patient  ki family ho aap ?

Rathod: nahi family jaise boliye na kya hau riya theek hai kya?

Dr:. dehko I need talk to her family

 

Arjun: tell me I'm her husband

 

Dr: oh acha mr.raute  aap ki wife has gone through a lot she is in complete shock and if she doesn't cry or show how she really feels if she just suffers her pain inside it will be very risky  and she will be getting nightmares raath ko don't leave her alone she will be very jumpy and scared she needs time the physical scars will heal sooner then the emotional n metal scares she has.

Her state is very delicate she needs as much love and support she can get and try not talk about what happened until she does 'just care for her  the nurse has changed her clothes she is resting

 

Arjun: ji doctor ill take of her more than my life thank you

 

They all go in the room she is asleep 

 

Rathod: aaj raat we will all stay with her here shree tab thak rana a file do

 

 

Everyone in the room is trying act normal and  study the next case file while arjun is sitting in the chair right next riya's bed in deep thought when suddenly

 

Riya begins to toss and turn then wake up screaming from her sleep

 

Riya: nahiii leave me  don't touch get away  ahhh

Arjun jumps up from his chair rathod sheer and chotu run towards the bed

 

Riya realizes that it's just here friends  she calms down arjun hands her glass of water

 

Arjun hand accidently touches her hand she drops the glass

 

 Riya just looks up at them doesn't speak

 

Rathod: riya please rest its fine don't worry sab theek hoga hum sab hai tumahre saath

 

Riya suddenly stands up and walks towards the bathroom and goes inside and locks it  they run after her  riya goes in shower with her clothes on and on's the cold water and just starts crying and drops to the floor she hugs her knees together and bends her head and cries her heart out

 

Shree: ri open the door please

Rathod: riya tum theek ho riya  suno open this door we all are worried  riya

Arjun: riya open this door right now samhje ya samhjao

Rathod: arjun abhi tho apna attitude band karo

 

CHOTU BREAK DOWN THE DOOR NOW

 

They all run in they see riya in the shower with her clothes on  crying and  washing  her hands roughly

 

Suddenly arjun goes to  go to her but is stopped by rathore

 

Rathod: rako she doesn't need to treated rudely at this time shree jao

 

Shree runs to riya

Riya screams

 

Riya: get away don't come near me go  

 

Shree: ri it's me shree  you'll get sick  the water is so cold  come out

 

Riya pushes shree away

 

Riya: nahi  all you  of out now I need   to  shower  I feel disgusting  I can still feel his touch his disgusting touch  gahin aate hai muhje  cries riya

 

She is scrubbing her hands  clean with soap

 

Chotu: riya you'll hurt yourself stop

 

Rathore : riya please bas karo your hands are red 

 

Riya: theek hai phir make his sickening touch go away please

 

Rathod, shree and chotu where crushed after hearing riya's words 

 

She continues to wash her hands and face not stopping

 

Rathod calmly tries to talk to her: riya I promise it will go away  please abhi tum  he tries to console her

 

Arjun goes up to her 

 

Arjun he gives her a towel   while giving her the towel he injects the sleep meds in her so she can get some rest

Ahh but she suddenly faints arjun catches her but then is pushed away from rathod

 

Rathod: Chotu go get nurse tell to come in here and change riya's clothes then ill place her  on the bed

 

Raute ek  haad hote hai tum kaise 

 

Arjun: rathod I had no choice she was go crazy dehka na she was hurting her self

 

Rathod: I know what you did was right par there is a way suddenly 

 

Nurse  brings riya  she is very drowsy arjun picks her up in his arms she suddenly begins to kick him and screams

 

Get away don't touch me leave me yells riya

Arjun somehow manages to place her on the bed  she doze off to sleep

 

Shree has tears in his eyes

 

Shree:I can bare this anymore just look at how ree  is damn it

 

Rathod:Shree we have be strong to be there for riya



Edited by Fiza28 - 10 September 2012 at 7:45pm

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Ch 3
 

2weeks later riya was acting normal getting on with life there were guards outside her house 24/7 for her protection

 

She got ready and headed to the ETF headquarters

 

 

Chotu: riya kaise hai yaar koi baat hui

 

 

Riya: hey guys aaj ka case kya hai

 

Rathod: riya tum yahan you're on leave you need rest 

 

Riya :main theek hoon Sir I'd like to join my duty once again

 

Shree hands her a cup of coffee

 

Suddenly arjun comes behind her and grabs her hand she drops her coffee mug in fear  and screams

 

Riya: AHHH

 

Arjun: tum theek nahi ho you need rest  your are mentally and emotionally not stable  you were Ra

 

*she slaps him*

Riya :   Stop it Sir   I'm sorry laken tum aise kasie kar sak the ho I hate you I said I'm fine  as much as I want to forget what happened you won't let me na  ' yes I know what happened I'm am very much aware what I went through  but you(pointing a finger at him and looking at all the men)  '..none of you men will understand what I'm going through  none  only  I know what hell I'm in and why I want forget this I know that I can't change what happened but I want to forget   this that's all is it too much to ask '.she has tears in her eyes and storms  out of the room crying

 

Shree and chotu  go after her

 

Shree :ri wait

 

Chotu: shree rako I'm also coming  

 

Rathod: unemotional ka haad hota hai she just been through this and you Raute  disgusting she was just getting better aur tum damn it

 

Arjun: let me  do what I'm doing its only to help her rathod doctor said she has  to cry she has to talk what happened she can't show her I'm brave front or she will get worse trust me

 

Rathod: no Raute what you did was wrong job hi ho  ab let go talk to riya

 

Rathod and arjun come where riya shree and chotu are

 

Shree: sab theek hoga ri don't worry

 

Riya: bullshit shree bas stop I'm tired of hearing this from everyone here you all are wrong nothing is theek and won't be and I know that but still I want my normal life back is that too much to ask stop this sympathy stuff and treat me  like you all use to please I beg of you all

 

 

Rathod: riya you are right we all are just worried for you  bas but we will make sure things will be like they were before

 

Riya: thank you sir and I'm sorry for my temper 

 

Rathod: no its ok Riya looking at arjun some of  needed it

 

Riya: sir ajj ka case kya hai

 

Rathod: abhi thak no case riya so  paper work

 

Shree: yaar ri yeh sab chor you know something chotu finally found out the girl's name  at  the department store

 

Riya: oh chotu really   oh la la so what's her name ? bolo na

 

 

Chotu:  Pinky he blushes

 

Riya: aye haye pinky and chotu  that is just too cute

 

Shree: aur ri yeh hi nahi pata hai pinky na ek cook hai she works at the dhaba on mali street  we should go there once

 

Riya: haan yaar that would be fun

 

Rathod: guys kuch kaam bhi kar lo  sirf baatein nahi

 

Rathod: wiase not bad idea shree kyun nahi hum sab next week chotu ki birthday ki liye wahan  pe jaye?

 

Riya: rocking idea sir I'm hungry ill get a snack

 

Arjun hands her a bagel

 

She looks at him she takes it without saying a  word

 

Shree nudges chotu

 

Riya is eating the bagel  while little cream cheese is on her lip

 

Shree: ri you have something on your lip

 

Arjun comes and wipes it eye lock

 

Riya moves away

 

A week later

Shree chotu rathod and arjun in car going pick up riya for the dinner

 

Shree: finally ri is back to normal she is fine now she laughs and like are old riya

 

Chotu: I know yaar who would know that 3 weeks ago what hell she went through

 

 

Rathod: that's are riya strong and brave let's just make sure we don't remind her of what ever happened

 

Arjun: you guys are blind she is still suffer but quietly  kis ko bolti nahi

 

Rathod: we all know this Raute we just are trying respect her wishes bas

 

At her house riya comes out wearing red tight pants and   shiny black long sleeve lace top  and black heels

 

Guys are looking at her

 

Riya gets in the back with chotu and shree

 

Shree: super top lag re ho ri

 

Chotu: dahsu lag ra ho

 

 

Riya:  thanks guys happy birthday chotu this for you

Hands him a gift  open it at dinner

 

Chotu: thanks riya

 

Arjun keeps glancing at her from the mirror

 

Arjun thinks itna tight pants  kyun pena tha  he rolls his  eyes 

 

At the place

 

Riya: chotu yeh place hygienic  tho hai na

 

Chotu: riya haan yaar

 

The waiter comes

 

Chotu orders  paneer  thikka, chaana butura,, malai kofta's,and sarsu ka saag maaki di roti  aur

 

Rathod: chotu itna kahana  already order kare bas if we want we always order again

 

Chotu opens the gift it's a picture of the whole ETF team

 

Arjun: wow acha gift hai  main soch ra tha ki koi girly typical gift hoga

 

Riya looks at him and rolls her eyes

 

Suddenly the dhol starts riya shree  start dancing Bhangra

 

Rathod: acha hai riya is smiling na kyun Raute

 

Arjun: haan Rathod after long time she is smiling

 

The food comes

 

Everyone Is eating

 

 

The waiter comes and asks what they want to drink

Rathod:  salty laasi

Shree:  meethi laasi

Chotu: lassi

Riya: mango lassi with a straw

And you sir asks the waiter kuch nahi pani

Riya: ek minute ek masala cutting chai unki liye

Arjun looks up and nods

Chotu :whispers do dil mil re hai magar chup ke chup ke

Shree: sab ko ho re hai khaber chup ke chup ke  they both laugh

Riya is eating food when suddenly she chokes

And starts coughing

Arjun grabs water and gives to her he comes and sits near her trying calm her

Other then the ETF team   a old couple is noticing this that is sitting near there table

Punjabi woman: aye haye  dehko ji kitna soni Jodi hai

Sardar : haan ji kuri bhi pyaari hai

Punjabi  lady: oye munde aap ki moti kitni pyaari haan ji

Sardar : aur bhabhi ji aap pati tho tumse kitna pyaar kar tha hai

Chotu shree and rathod are amused

Shree: oye arjun sir ka gussa ab shy rocket hoga

Chotu: haan yaar poor riya

Rathod: raute hai gussa tho always

Riya: ji yeh mera husband nahi hai aur main aap ki bhabhi nahi hoon

Sardar:  oh ho acha samja boyfriend hai koi nahi kal husband hoga

Arjun: dehko yeh meri kuch nai lag thi hai Samje ya samjao

Riya: looks at him  hurt

After dinner they go back to chotu's house to cut the cake

In the car

Riya: yaar chotu im sorry but pinky isn't a good cook I feel sick I think I have food poisoning

Rathod: kyun kya hau riya we are ate and we all are fine

Arjun: larki hai rathod delicate  hai

Riya:  nahi I bet it was hygienic  this always happens when  eat at places like that

The get to the place she runs inside and runs in the bathroom

She starts throwing up

 She comes out

Shree: ri you ok?

Riya: yup I'll be fine this  happens a lot if  I eat outside food I'll be fine

They are cut the cake  after a while they all go home

 

Next day at ETF

Riya walks in

Shree: ri how you today

Riya: im better I guess it was the food

Chotu: sorry ri

Riya: no chotu don't be

Rathod walks in ok guys so ek evidence mila hai  the man who was painting the house  used this paint laken something else was mixed in it ab you guys tell me iss paint  bucket si yeh paint what's the difference rathod opens them

Riya: Sir the smell it is awful please closes it

Arjun: smell come on riya  aisa kuch nahi hai they smell fine

Riya: nahi sir please its smells horrible

Suddenly riya feels dizzy

Chotu catches her and sits her down

Rathod: shree close the paint now

Arjun hands her water she drinks it

Arjun: ab kaise ho

Riya : theek hoon smell just got to me

She gets up when she feels dizzy again and faints

Arjun: shree call a doctor now

Doctor comes out

arjun: doctor how is Riya

Doctor: she is fine no need to worry Mr.Raute congratulations she is pregnant she is asleep she doesn't know yet  so when she wakes up please give her the good news she leaves

Arjun:  what iss ka matlab 

Rathod: Rana jo kiya yeh uska bacha hai

Shree: oh no poor Ri how will she handle this

Chotu : who will tell her and how will we tell her that she is pregnant that too with rana's baby

Riya comes out she hears them

Riya: KYA preg '. Main ' Pregnant ' no ' no

Shree goes to her

Shree: ri  please calm down

Riya: bullshit you all are lying  

Riya: shree please tell me  yeh jhoot hai yeh can't be happening  nahi please she almost faints

Arjun: dehko riya  please clam down sit here yeh hi sach hai

Riya: no you all are lying

Arjun: really lying '  takes her hand and places on her lower tummy

Her  hand on her  is on tummy  

Arjun : abhi tum lag tha hai ki yeh jhoot hai riya nahi  yeh karva sach hai

suddenly she moves her hands and has tears in her eyes'

she drops to the floor crying

Precap ch4

Few days later

Riya: sir I'd like to take 2days  I need some space

Rathore: riya you can take as many days as needed

Riya: thank you sir  she leaves

Arjun: shree uska cell tap karo  who kis se baat kart hi kahan jaate I want everything

Shree: kya par kyun sir

Arjun: do what im telling you no questions samhje ya samjao?

Rathore: yeh kya hai Raute riya koi criminal nahi hai

 

Hour later

Shree: sir riya ka cell kis se baat kar re hai

Riya: haan doctor I'll be there in half hour thank you

Doctor: Riya this is very risky yeh abortion can be life-threatening your body is already very weak and mentally you're very stressed  as your doctor im advising you not to do this

ETF Team: Abortion

Shree:arjun sir you were right

Riya: doctor yeh body meri hai yeh baby bhi mera hai whatever I want to do I will do main yeh abortion kar re hoon that is final  she cuts the call

Arjun "yeh larki pagal hoge hai  kya  he runs out of the office

Shree: ri kaise yeh kar sak thi hai

Rathore: chotu get the car Raute gusse main hai aur riya hush main nahi hai jaldi karo we have stop them both

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



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Wow that was really good. Please continue soon and please pm me.

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Great...
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