Fan Fiction: The Kidnap

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi Friends!!!
Hope you guys are having a wonderful time!!!
Though our Thendral is on a positive mode, all we get is to see is sentiment and crying and crying.
Suddenly a possible future story struck me.
I am very much happy to share it with you guys!
Give me your support! Your encouragement is very much needed!
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Posted: 11 years ago
THENDRAL FICTION
Scene :  Tamil and Thulasi's house (around 6:00 pm raining)

Tamil is sitting in the porch, admiring his wife's picture on his phone and smiling to himself.😳 
Thulasi coming back from college, tired and wet.πŸ˜‰Entering through the gates.
Tamil, "Hi kuttima. Vaa. Ena college la sema work a? Romba tired a irrukka."
Thulasi, "Amma ga. Enuma 1 month holidays la athan ela lecturers um evalo torture kuduka mudiyumo kuduthu tanga."
Tamil taking the bag from her😊, "Lecturers a nee thitu riya? athu than mala peithu pola."πŸ˜†
Thulasi, "Hm..enavo. Chuda oru cup coffee kadaikuma, please. En chellam la."😳 
Tamil, " Illa."😲 Both of them stare angrily and start laughing.πŸ˜›
Tamil, " Po poi fresh up aitu va. Coffee, table la ready a irukum"😊
Thulasi, "Thank you! Umah" kisses him on his cheeks☺️ and goes to take a shower.
Thulasi comes out of her bathroom. There is no light in the bedroom. 
"Enga, bedroom la tubelight a matha num." So saying she comes out to the hall. 
There is no light there either.πŸ˜•
The only light is from a few well placed candles.πŸ‘ 
A coffee table in the middle of the room with two chairs on either side. Coffee steaming in two coffee mugs.😎 
"Hm..Sir inaku sema romantic mood la irukaru pola.πŸ˜› Enga! En ga irukinkaga?" 
Tamil comes from behind her and hugs her.☺️ Thulasi is startled in the beginning, then smiles, "E..na..ga.." πŸ˜³
"Ena achu?" 
"..Ka..thu..than varruhtu.."πŸ˜† Tamil laughs. 
"Apa ala vidunga" releases herself from his grip.πŸ˜›
"First coffee, then romance." πŸ˜‘
"Ena vida coffee mukiyam a?" 
"Ama." πŸ˜²
"Ada." 
Thulasi smiles and goes and sits in a chair, Tamil follows.
He watches as she sips her coffee. She notices and blushes, a shy smile.😳He smiles warmly back. They lock eyes across the table. Both of them are lost in the depth of each other's eyes.😳There is just one slice of chocolate cake to share and a single spoon.πŸ˜‰ He feeds her a small bite. She can't help but smile with pleasure at his gesture.😳 He takes a large bite. She smiles quietly at his playfulness. Another bite for Thulasi. Larger than the first. Some of it is left on her lips😳, he had planned that. He reaches forward towards her before she can protest. He puts his hand softly on her cheek and leans toward her.😳 She leans toward him. He kisses her gently☺️, tasting the sweetness and he knows it is not the cake.πŸ˜‰
Just then his phone rings.😑 Tamil wakes up startled.😲It was all his dream.😑 He is still sitting in the porch. He smiles to himself.πŸ₯± He looks at the clock. Its 7 and Thulasi isn't back home.😲
Like it if you like it!😊
Should I continue?πŸ˜›
Edited by Gisel - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow Gisel nice story!  

Great to see you writing again.  I love the first part especially how you wrote the dialogues  in Tamil and I can picture Tamil and Tulasi actually talking like this.  

Definitely waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow Gisel awesome part!πŸ‘ ennama wrote panni irukuringe, waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Good one Gisel! Very intresting... keep it upπŸ‘πŸΌ. Waiting for the next oneπŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful story, Gisel. Definitely I look forward to the next part of this story. Very nice writing portraying beautifully the tenderness TA and T have for each other.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice writing Gisel ⭐️ ... could almost feel the rain and chill ... and picturise TA leaning forward towards T ... wow ☺️ ... eagerly waiting for the next part ... pls continue...πŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
WOW! wonderful story giselπŸ‘πŸΌ...pls continue we are waiting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Precap:
Thulasi, "Theriyom di! Pona varshum naibagam iruka. En birthday a epidi celebrate pannu narunu.(scenes flash through her mind😳) Ithu varaikum oru suprise um nan kudathu illa. Ana inaku..."
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Posted: 11 years ago
THENDRAL FICTION
Scene: Continues...
A phone call interrupts Tamil's beautiful dream😑. Tamil attends the call. It's Deepa.πŸ₯±
Deepa, "Hello sir. Nan Deepa pesuren." (theriyum it shows on the phoneπŸ˜›)
Tamil, "Han. Sollu Deepa. Ena vishuyum?" 
Deepa, "Konjam Thulasi iruntha kupudiringala? Ava phone switch off la iruku."πŸ˜•
Tamil, "Switch off a? Charge theinthirukum. Seri Thulasi un kuda illaya?"πŸ˜• (confused)
Deepa, "Illa ya. Nalaiku vacation start agurathu nala, mathianamai vitutanga."
Tamil, "Thulasi enum vetuku varaliya."😲
Deepa, "Vetuku varatha thena sonna. Enga poirupa?"
Tamil, "Ethavuthu friends vetuku poirupa. Nan pathu kirein. Thulasi vantha odana call panna sollurein."
Deepa, "Seri sir. "
Tamil, "Ok Deepa. Bye."
Deepa, "Bye sir."
Tamil (mindvoice), "Enga poirupa?"
Tamil looks at the clock. It is 8.
Tamil starts getting restless. He goes out into the porch. It is raining heavily and is pitch dark.
Tamil (angry), "Itha nerathila enga poirupa." πŸ˜’ He is pacing in the porch. 
He finally decides to go check for her. He goes in to change his dress and takes his raincoat. He writes a note to tell her to call him in case she reaches home before him😊.
It is raining heavily.πŸ€” He takes his bike and decides to retrace the path Thulasi normally takes back home. The streetlights are out. There is only light from his bike and a car behind him.
Scene shifts to Deepa's house...
Deepa, "Santhoshama! In nerum Tamil sir un thedi veliya poirupar. Va vettuku polam."😲
Thulasi (smiling), "Thanks Deepa."πŸ˜•
Deepa, "Ipdi oru surprise kudukanuma.πŸ˜’ Mala epdi peiyuthu paru. Itha nerathila avara alaividura."
Thulasi, "Theriyom di! Pona varshum naibagam iruka. En birthday a epidi celebrate pannu narunu. Ithu varaikum oru suprise um nan kudathu illa. Ana inaku..."
Deepa, "Inaiku?" 😳(teasingly over her shoulders)
Thulasi, "Po di"😳
Deepa, "Hm..Seri. seri. Va pohalam. Tamil sir therumbi vanthira poraru. Antha balloons, candles elam eduthiya?"😳
Thulasi, "Ama."
Scene shifts to Tamil
It is raining heavily and the car is still behind Tamil.πŸ˜• 
Hm..Was this plan needed and that too at night?πŸ˜•
What do you expect?πŸ˜‰
Edited by Gisel - 11 years ago