Hehehe me late again but this time no apologies, kyunki
tujhe pasand nahi…
Gulaal toh total goner na, she doesn't even realise how she
has started exercising her right of having that undivided attention from him, his withdrawal even though within the boundaries
they had defined earlier is not acceptable, her expectations are growing with her affection, her haq is being exerted
so subtly unknown even to her….
Kesar on the other hand is still not clear about his growing
jealousy and possessiveness is just part of his love, his sudden scowl the
moment he sees her with Vasant, forgetting all about why he was waiting for
her and getting all worked up shows this
immature side of him that one can relate with …completely Kesarish…jumping to
conclusions w/o giving anyone a chance to clarify things…
I loved that lil conversation in the car where Gulaal is
opening up to Kesar,just conveys her growing comfort and trust in her best
friend and Kesar though happy about this new
found openness can't get over the fact that it was Vasant who had brought
this on and not him…can't blame him really…
His attention grabbing technique by demanding that he is
served vegetable was so cute,it not only signifies his need of acknowledgment
of his presence from her but also
depicts how ignorance from her is the last thing he will put up with….nicely
done…
And then finally his rant,jo dil mein wohi jubaan pe…after
all this is Kesar,who can never hide anything that's troubling him for long…downright
honest even at the cost of being slapped around and then the realization of
what he accused her off…very well written this part..beautiful…and then the
amzing confession from Gulaal…wow..wonderful..she was hurt,he was not only
questioning her affection but also character…he was the only one she trusted in
all these years and he was accusing her of infidelity….but you know what I
liked about it all instead of sulking and keeping all within her like she would
have done otherwise his honesty and possessiveness made her open up and finally
confess….and the rest well who toh hona hi tha….
Thankyou for a lovely update Mini,please bring on the new
chapter really quickly…a big hug for a wonderful update
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