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Sudha-SK

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Posted: 02 September 2012 at 6:46pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by sadiyaswaron

Sudha it was really beautifull os
The way u described swayam's emotion was amazing n lastly the poem just loved it

Thanks

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Thanks

Originally posted by Nehal92

whoa!!! Day Dreaming

it was a cute..very cute OS!! loveed it.. Clap

i love reyam.. they are the best.. after swaron... Smile

Awesome sudha... Hug

Thanks Nehal Hug

Originally posted by kool kanz

sudha ur os's r too luk forward for...never disappoiting...super cute swaron...d way dey both missed each other was sooo cute... Smile

thank u for d pm...

Thanks for your comments dear Smile

Originally posted by ABBY92

This was truly beautiful !!! Loved Swayam's reaction when he was forced to leave for the meeting and when he came back home to find everyone at home with Sharon !!! The poem in the end really touched my heart and was perfect for SwaRon !!

Thanks Abby Smile

Originally posted by NikiBh8

Sudha It Ws Beautiful Hug

Well Written Embarrassed

Thanks Niki Hug

Originally posted by mohitmohanty19

Awsm os sudha... Ur writng just out of this world..the mixutr of...love, romance and poem ..."ek number"...:)...thats why i am a big fan of urs...:)

Thanks and thats so sweet of you to say that.

BTW when are you posting your poem?

Originally posted by mahirahmarium

Awwiiee..Its one of the most beautiful and perfect OS I have ever read .. Embarrassed

And the poem stole my heart..it was so lovely and sweet of Swayam to do such things for her princess Embarrassed

Thank you so much Smile

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Sudha-SK

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Posted: 02 September 2012 at 7:41pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by beeny

hey sudha... Smile

it's soo nice ye itna simple & sweet he & love is everywhere soo sweet Smile

love OS
poem is also good aap achchhe poet bhi ho Thumbs Up

Thank you so much Smile

Originally posted by tanzz15

Rightly said by everyone sudha,i was simple yet very romantic.it had mesmerizing effects & the poem...oh...just outstanding!!!...love your creations always...huggs..;)

Thanks Tania Smile

and *hugs back*

Originally posted by misha24

The post is just bang on!!!

Thanx fr pm and do write more!!!

Thank you

Originally posted by surbhimathur

It was such a sweet OS sudha...!
Light romance and typical husband wife relation you depicted...not like..swayam gave her a surprise and cancelled the meeting!
you kept it natural!
and it was lovely..!
The poem in the end was really sweet!!
i hope we get to read sum awesome stuff again..if your time permits!

Thanks Surbhi Embarrassed

Yeah it was close to reality and simple and romantic just like Swayam. and sure will try writing more as and when time permits Smile

Originally posted by nature2

awwiieee

this was amazing sudha !!

sry 4 late comment

Thanks for your comments and no problem dear..

Originally posted by angelofdeathkav

Sudha I just read It now, It's sooo cute, I loved the way you have written it, the little touches made it a delight to read, keep writing more! Awesome job!

Thanks Kavi Big smile

happy that it made a delightful read and sure will keep writing more Embarrassed

Originally posted by sw1234

really nice .sharon kab real me i love you kahe gi.kab wo special day aayega.but it was good to see them together in ur ss.

Thank you so much Smile

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Posted: 02 September 2012 at 7:47pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by sadiakajenian

its awesome! Loved reading it Clap

Thank you

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Thank you for the beautiful rose Embarrassed

Originally posted by shaani2209

lovely one sudha sorry for being late...thanks for the pm...

Thanks Rosh Smile

Originally posted by gupta.aditi20

wow that was good...
do you by any chance can be the writer of swaron scenes in d3???
i'll be really glad

Thanks Aditi Smile

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Posted: 02 September 2012 at 7:58pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by swayamsharon

amazing os!!
nicely wrriten!!
poem is lovely!!!
swayam remind whole journey of swayam-sharon to be swaron loved it!!! Heart

thanks 4 pm

Thanks Shree Smile

Originally posted by sreya19roy

Awieee sudha Hug

Ohk I might fumble a lil coz like always I'm again SPEECHLESS...n I completely blame u for this sudha...u r the culprit LOL

Ohk now coming to the OS...This was so so sooo amazing yaar...hayee SwaRon romance Day Dreaming

This was such a sweet, simple, romantic OS yet it depicts the love of SwaRon for each other so beautifully Smile

Totally different writing from the previous SS that I read bt my reaction after reading ur work still remains the same as it was after reading "The Sunset" Smile

Again brilliant writing...each n every emotions were beautifully penned down Clap

The friends wala thing that u included was superb n I personally loved it a lot Big smile

N obviously how can I forget the poem in the end...it was most definitely the cherry on the cake Smile

such a sweet n cute poem Smile

n these last few lines:

I know I am the worst poet, but by far the best poem ever written is You "My Sharon", My "Siren Shaorn" Day Dreaming hayee u killed me sudha Hug

Super duper like from me dear Thumbs Up

ps. I can't believe after writing such a beautiful OS, u thought I won't like it Shocked

Sreya

Thank you so much for your long comments dear. I feel elated Embarrassed

I know this is poles apart from my SS Sunset, for a change something real simple and romantic like Swayam Embarrassed

thanks for liking the poem as its an integral part of the OS and Swayam's thought.

Originally posted by swaronilicious

One of the best os

Pls pm me lyk dis love ya

And hats off for such a concept

Thank you

Sudha-SK

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Posted: 02 September 2012 at 8:09pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by frankyfio

wow

beautifully written

Thank you

Originally posted by luvSwaron4ever

what a beautiful OS sudha...

amazing...their beautiful trial relation journey turning into marriage and its their first anniversary...

feel good OS...beautifully written dear

Thank you so much dear Embarrassed

Originally posted by Satluvsd3

so sorry sudha!!i am the last one i guess!!!!!!!to comment!!
so you will have to bear me yet again!
loved your OS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Embarrassed

awww
i really had a big smile n was really blushing through out ... amazingly written!!!!!!! Thumbs Up

can it get any better than this!!!!!!!!! Star

amazing job done by you!!!!!!! Clap

enjoyed the part where the driver teases him by saying "bhabhi ji" LOL

loved everything from the part they bid goodbyes to each from the airport scene to flight thoughts to presentation to writing in the journal about his SIREN SHARON!!! Embarrassed

to returning back!! awww loved how they hugged each other and wished! Embarrassed

n the 1st best part THE GANG ROFL

and the 2nd best part was when u described swayam's arrangements for his SHARON!!! wonderfull!!wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! loved it !!!!!!
i really couldnt stop blushing n smiling n of course saying awww n walking through their memory lane! Embarrassed

an sharon's reaction to the gifts!wooowww
and the 3rd n best of all parts "the poem!"
OMG!!!!!!! sudha u really took my heart away
But by far the best poem
Ever written is
You "My Sharon"
My "Siren Shaorn"
Happy Anniversary.
hayyyeee awww really cute n totally SwaRonlicious!
well done sudha!am sorry again for replying late so sorry!
love you alot!!!!!! thanks for giving all of us this OS!!!!!!
and what about your sunset SS!!??

Thank you so much Satu Hug

as always i loved your comments and it makes me so happy dear Big smile

I am so happy that you could also enjoy the humor along with the simplicity and romance.

I love how you quoted my fav bit of poem, and thanks for liking it re Embarrassed

and SS will soon update..and am really sorry for being late.

Originally posted by ---Priya---

sudha... this was such a cute OS...

very romantic... simply written.. too good yaar Clap

SwaRon such a cute couple...

Swayam's reaction when he saw his friends LOL

poor swayam... didnt expect them LOL

the poem was fab...

so sorry for being late... was a bit busy Smile

Thanks for your comments Priya, so i see you are back. How was ur trip back home?

hope you had fun Big smile

I am happy you liked the humor part very much.

Originally posted by ShrutikaSwaRon

Very beautifully written...bechara swayam was expecting only sharon at home...but his frnds too turned out to wish them...luved reyam's convo...thnx for pm.

Thanks for your comments dear Smile

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 3:02am | IP Logged

oh wow...SO wel writn n SOOO beautiful!!

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 2:17am | IP Logged

Good Job Sudha...wow...and d poem Superb...Loved each n evry moment... Clap

Edited by shikha31 - 05 September 2012 at 2:18am

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 7:08am | IP Logged

Originally posted by like.no.other

oh wow...SO wel writn n SOOO beautiful!!

Thanks

Originally posted by shikha31

Good Job Sudha...wow...and d poem Superb...Loved each n evry moment... Clap

Thanks

Edited by Sudha-SK - 05 September 2012 at 2:42pm

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