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Posted: 02 September 2012 at 6:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sadiyaswaron

Sudha it was really beautifull os
The way u described swayam's emotion was amazing n lastly the poem just loved it

Thanks Smile

QUOTE=-Antu-_-Aslan-]loved it!Big smile[/QUOTE]

Thanks Smile

Originally posted by Nehal92

whoa!!! Day Dreaming
it was a cute..very cute OS!! loveed it..Clap
i love reyam.. they are the best..  after swaron... Smile

Awesome sudha... Hug

Thanks Nehal Hug

Originally posted by kool kanz

sudha ur os's r too luk forward for...never disappoiting...super cute swaron...d way dey both missed each other was sooo cute...SmileSmilethank u for d pm...

Thanks for your comments dear Smile

Originally posted by ABBY92

This was truly beautiful !!! Loved Swayam's reaction when he was forced to leave for the meeting and when he came back home to find everyone at home with Sharon !!! The poem in the end really touched my heart and was perfect for SwaRon !!

Thanks Abby Smile

Originally posted by NikiBh8

Sudha It Ws Beautiful  Hug
Well Written Embarrassed

Thanks Niki Hug

Originally posted by mohitmohanty19

Awsm os sudha... Ur writng just out of this world..the mixutr of...love, romance and poem ..."ek number"...:)...thats why i am a big fan of urs...:)

Thanks and thats so sweet of you to say that.
BTW when are you posting your poem? 

Originally posted by mahirahmarium

Awwiiee..Its one of the most beautiful and perfect OS I have ever read ..Embarrassed
And the poem stole my heart..it was so lovely and sweet of Swayam to do such things for her princessEmbarrassed

Thank you so much Smile


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Posted: 02 September 2012 at 7:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by beeny

hey sudha...Smile
it's soo nice ye itna simple & sweet he & love is everywhere soo sweetSmile
love OS
poem is also good aap achchhe poet bhi hoThumbs Up

Thank you so much Smile
Originally posted by tanzz15

Rightly said by everyone sudha,i was simple yet very romantic.it had mesmerizing effects & the poem...oh...just outstanding!!!...love your creations always...huggs..;)
Thanks Tania Smile and *hugs back*

Originally posted by misha24

The post is just bang on!!!
Thanx fr pm and do write more!!!

Thank you Smile

Originally posted by surbhimathur

It was such a sweet OS sudha...! Embarrassed
Light romance and typical husband wife relation you depicted...not like..swayam gave her a surprise and cancelled the meeting! LOL
you kept it natural! Smile
and it was lovely..! Heart
The poem in the end was really sweet!! Big smile
i hope we get to read sum awesome stuff again..if your time permits! Embarrassed

Thanks Surbhi Embarrassed
Yeah it was close to reality and simple and romantic just like Swayam. and sure will try writing more as and when time permits Smile

Originally posted by nature2

awwiieee Day Dreaming
this was amazing sudha !!
 
sry 4 late commentCry

Thanks for your comments and no problem dear..

Originally posted by angelofdeathkav

Sudha I just read It now, It's sooo cute, I loved the way you have written it, the little touches made it a delight to read, keep writing more! Big smile Awesome job!

Thanks Kavi Big smile
happy that it made a delightful read and sure will keep writing more Embarrassed

Originally posted by sw1234

really nice .sharon kab real me i love you kahe gi.kab wo special day aayega.but it was good to see them together in ur ss.

Thank you so much Smile

 

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Posted: 02 September 2012 at 7:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sadiakajenian

its awesome! Loved reading it Clap

Thank you Smile

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Thank you for the beautiful rose Embarrassed

Originally posted by shaani2209

lovely one sudha sorry for being late...thanks for the pm...

Thanks Rosh Smile

Originally posted by gupta.aditi20

wow that was good...
do you by any chance can be the writer of swaron scenes in d3???
i'll be really glad

Thanks Aditi Smile


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Posted: 02 September 2012 at 7:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by swayamsharon

amazing os!!
nicely wrriten!!
poem is lovely!!!
swayam remind whole journey of swayam-sharon to be swaron loved it!!!Heart
thanks 4 pm

Thanks Shree Smile

Originally posted by sreya19roy

Awieee sudha HugHug

Ohk I might fumble a lil coz like always I'm again SPEECHLESS...n I completely blame u for this sudha...u r the culprit LOL

Ohk now coming to the OS...This was so so sooo amazing yaar...hayee SwaRon romance Day DreamingDay Dreaming

This was such a sweet, simple, romantic OS yet it depicts the love of SwaRon for each other so beautifully Smile

Totally different writing from the previous SS that I read bt my reaction after reading ur work still remains the same as it was after reading "The Sunset" Smile

Again brilliant writing...each n every emotions were beautifully penned down Clap

The friends wala thing that u included was superb n I personally loved it a lot Big smile

N obviously how can I forget the poem in the end...it was most definitely the cherry on the cake Smile

such a sweet n cute poem Smile n these last few lines:

I know I am the worst poet, but by far the best poem ever written is You "My Sharon", My "Siren Shaorn" Day DreamingDay Dreaming hayee u killed me sudha Hug

Super duper like from me dear Thumbs Up

ps. I can't believe after writing such a beautiful OS, u thought I won't like it Shocked


Sreya Hug Hug
Thank you so much for your long comments dear. I feel elated Embarrassed
I know this is poles apart from my SS Sunset, for a change something real simple and romantic like Swayam Embarrassed thanks for liking the poem as its an integral part of the OS and Swayam's thought.

Originally posted by swaronilicious

One of the best os 
Pls pm me lyk dis love ya
And hats off for such a concept

Thank you Big smile



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Posted: 02 September 2012 at 8:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by frankyfio

wow 
beautifully written

Thank you Big smile

Originally posted by luvSwaron4ever

what a  beautiful OS sudha...

amazing...their beautiful trial relation journey turning into marriage and its their first anniversary...

feel good OS...beautifully written dear

Thank you so much dear Embarrassed 

Originally posted by Satluvsd3

so sorry sudha!!i am the last one i guess!!!!!!!to comment!! 
so you will have to bear me yet again! 
loved your OS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Embarrassed
awww 
i really had a big smile n was really blushing through out ... amazingly written!!!!!!!Thumbs Up
can it get any better than this!!!!!!!!!Star
amazing job done by you!!!!!!! Clap

enjoyed the part where the driver teases him by saying "bhabhi ji" LOL
loved everything from the part they bid goodbyes to each from the airport scene to flight thoughts to presentation to writing in the journal about his SIREN SHARON!!! Embarrassed to returning back!! awww loved how they hugged each other and wished!Embarrassed n the 1st best part THE GANG ROFL

and the 2nd best part was when u described swayam's arrangements for his SHARON!!! wonderfull!!wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! loved it !!!!!! 
i really couldnt stop blushing n smiling n of course saying awww n walking through their memory lane! EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
an sharon's reaction to the gifts!wooowww
and the 3rd n best of all parts "the poem!" 
OMG!!!!!!! sudha u really took my heart away

But by far the best poem

Ever written is

You "My Sharon"

My "Siren Shaorn"

Happy Anniversary. 

hayyyeee awww really cute n totally SwaRonlicious!

well done sudha!am sorry again for replying late so sorry!Cry

love you alot!!!!!! thanks for giving all of us this OS!!!!!! 

and what about your sunset SS!!?? Cry


Thank you so much Satu Hug
as always i loved your comments and it makes me so happy dear Big smile
I am so happy that you could also enjoy the humor along with the simplicity and romance. 
I love how you quoted my fav bit of poem, and thanks for liking it re Embarrassed
and SS will soon update..and am really sorry for being late. 

Originally posted by ---Priya---

sudha... this was such a cute OS...
very romantic... simply written.. too good yaar Clap
SwaRon such a cute couple...
Swayam's reaction when he saw his friends LOL LOL poor swayam... didnt expect them LOL
the poem was fab... 

so sorry for being late... was a bit busy Smile

Thanks for your comments Priya, so i see you are back. How was ur trip back home?
hope you had fun Big smile I am happy you liked the humor part very much. 

Originally posted by ShrutikaSwaRon

Very beautifully written...bechara swayam was expecting only sharon at home...but his frnds too turned out to wish them...luved reyam's convo...thnx for pm.

Thanks for your comments dear Smile


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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 3:02am | IP Logged
oh wow...SO wel writn n SOOO beautiful!! 

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 2:17am | IP Logged
Good Job Sudha...wow...and d poem Superb...Loved each n evry moment...Clap

Edited by shikha31 - 05 September 2012 at 2:18am

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 7:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by like.no.other

oh wow...SO wel writn n SOOO beautiful!! 

Thanks Smile

Originally posted by shikha31

Good Job Sudha...wow...and d poem Superb...Loved each n evry moment...Clap

Thanks Smile


Edited by Sudha-SK - 05 September 2012 at 2:42pm

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