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Posted: 31 August 2012 at 6:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Luvsd3

srously amezing...the unconditional love and swayums wait for her angel was beautifully shown...luvd it sudha

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Posted: 31 August 2012 at 6:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by swaron_d3

loved reading this OS..
it was a pleasure reading it..it was calm and soothing..
loved sharon when she added "for us" to his line..
she is very strict and don't want him to miss any opportunity which could prove to be fruitful..this reflects her thoughtfulness..
swayam surely have a bright future until and unless he has sharon by her side..
and the poem,mam you did it again..you are a *combo*..you could make a person cry,laugh,blush,hate,love everything at the same time.. hats off to you!

P.S:sorry for the late comment.

Thanks Ananya. 
Aww you noticed that when she said "for us" because its was equally painful for her to let him go.
Thanks for liking the poem too, it was just Swayam talking in his very style Embarrassed
and no problem dear, you don't have to be sorry for being late.
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Posted: 31 August 2012 at 5:13pm | IP Logged
Hey Sudha yet another awesome OS from you...quite romantic i must say. Smile

Love how you kept dere characters as original as possible...Sharon the one who always prefer to hide her feelings and Swayam understanding her golden silence. 

I really miss Kria on the show..i never liked kria but damn taani made me miss kria and i feel so happy when Taani is not a part of any SwaRon OS, FF or SS so a big thank you fr not including her. 

Swayam's reaction when he saw hsi frndz was funny...thank you for the PM and sorry for commenting so late, was not at all active since past few days. Keep them coming Sudha Smile



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Posted: 01 September 2012 at 12:20am | IP Logged
Really a nice and a pleasant read. It was lovely to read SwaRon yearning to be with each other on their anniversary, it was beautifully shown.The poem in the end, was really great, like an icing on the cake. I also liked the title very much. Embarrassed

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Posted: 01 September 2012 at 4:56am | IP Logged
Oh, that is mainstream India-Forums-After-Marriage-Cliche. Dun mind me, you know how I don't gel with mainstream as such. However, all fandoms have writers who have these after-marriage ideas. So, I have read this before. What I like is your execution. What I like is that the fact that I really read through it all without any remorse on my face and everything. You've improved with your way with words which as I said when I first read an OS from you, is unique. Approve

Thanks for the PM; apologies for the delay.

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Posted: 01 September 2012 at 6:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AmritaluvSwaRon

Hey Sudha yet another awesome OS from you...quite romantic i must say. Smile

Love how you kept dere characters as original as possible...Sharon the one who always prefer to hide her feelings and Swayam understanding her golden silence. 

I really miss Kria on the show..i never liked kria but damn taani made me miss kria and i feel so happy when Taani is not a part of any SwaRon OS, FF or SS so a big thank you fr not including her. 

Swayam's reaction when he saw hsi frndz was funny...thank you for the PM and sorry for commenting so late, was not at all active since past few days. Keep them coming Sudha Smile


Thanks Amu Smile  I am happy you could relate to the Sharon and Swayam. 
And no porb, its ok..you commented and thats what matters Embarrassed


Originally posted by gargicool

Really a nice and a pleasant read. It was lovely to read SwaRon yearning to be with each other on their anniversary, it was beautifully shown.The poem in the end, was really great, like an icing on the cake. I also liked the title very much. Embarrassed

Thanks Gargi Smile 

Originally posted by Savage

Oh, that is mainstream India-Forums-After-Marriage-Cliche. Dun mind me, you know how I don't gel with mainstream as such. However, all fandoms have writers who have these after-marriage ideas. So, I have read this before. What I like is your execution. What I like is that the fact that I really read through it all without any remorse on my face and everything. You've improved with your way with words which as I said when I first read an OS from you, is unique. Approve

Thanks for the PM; apologies for the delay.

Love from
Kanks

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He he he mainstream India-forums cliche Embarrassed Thats exactly why i wanted you to read this Kanks.
By the outside looks, i see i am saved by the way i executed this one..which makes me real happy Big smile  Also knowing that you did not regret it Smile I know unlike my previous OS's this one did not have a unique idea, but this was plain Swayam's POV and i did not want it to be like " life as we know it" either. Just simple Swayam expressing his love for Sharon. Thanks for appreciating the uniqueness in the play of words. And Kanks you really don't have to thank me for the PM, by the time a idea strikes of a OS, we usually talk about it..and besides i do look forward to ur comments. Nor do u have to be sorry for commenting late..nope never. 

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Originally posted by -Nia-

Sudha Di Hug
 
I am extremely sorry for not commenting earlier.I erm,had cumulative and exams issues.Ermm
 
This was so well written.The way Swayam reacted when he saw his friends on returning was hilarious.LOL
 
The last part and the poem was beautiful.So cute...I loved it.Embarrassed

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No problem dear:) am happy it made a hilarious read to you Smile
Thanks for liking the poem Embarrassed




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